I just feel like adding a little more to my review, because I feel like my other review wasn’t thorough enough. I’ve always had an issue with canon Tsuna being annoyingly controlling of what the girls could and could not know about the mafia, and I still see him acting like that in this fic which means there is the potential for tsuna to develop in this story and that’s a good thing imo.

You see, I’m very picky when it comes to Tsuna pairings (but I remembered liking 6927 and 0027 a little) and I’m probably the one percent who finds him unshippable with anyone because with his guardians it feels like there’s an abuse of power, and with kyoko and haru, it always just felt like there was no development (also I just really hate the love triangle trope a lot) in either of the two characters for me to care much about them.

So, I really like where this story is going so far, but I can’t really feel much if it’s just going to be at the crush stage, also like Izumi mentioned, there is still this wall that separates them no matter how obvious their attraction is for each other. Maybe it’s just me being overly picky when it comes to romance, and maybe I’m demanding too much, but I love the idea of Izumi going above what was expected of her and gaining some respect for herself.

I love the idea of Tsuna getting a partner that would stand up to him and call him out when necessary. Some relationships needs some bumps on the road for it to work after all, and I think communication is key in any stable relationship. Also, I love Izumi’s emphasis on Tsuna’s kindness rather than his cute looks (though appearances are also important in romance lol). So, I guess I’m hoping for her to come clean to Tsuna about his bad traits lol, even if it ends in a argument, I feel like the higher the obstacle; the more meaning there will be in their relationship once they overcome it.

I find Tsuna adorably annoying but maybe it’s because this story has been told in Izumi’s pov, and ofc she doesn’t know what’s going on in Tsuna’s mind, but maybe it should be high time for a Tsuna pov chapter. I love how Izumi is just this normal girl in every sense of the word, it honestly makes it easier for me to ship her with Tsuna lol. Sorry for the long review, I just felt like telling you this after my second time through this story, now that I got a better grasp of this story this time.

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This story had been such a wild ride, it turned from a simple coffee shop AU to some mafia mystery story now LOL. I’m hoping in the back of my head that Haru and Kyoko are seeing each other haha, also, can’t wait to see how Tsuna reacts to finding out about her internship, I have a feeling that he will figure out on his own though.

Hm, I thought that Gotou might be Mukuro possessing him and Hiraoka is the spy... But now I'm confused.

Please update this! This is the first KHR fic with full, original plots that don't make me cringe or make the too character OOC. In fact, I can say with full confidence that this is one of the best KHR fics!

I wonder what kind of flame Izumi have...? or would you make her unable to use it or anything... I hope she do have it!

Again, please update this!

I love this storyyyy! please update soon~ I have re-read this story soo many times.

Honestly at this ooint I can suspect Goto and that other guy who bothers Izumi all the time. Gosh.. the cliffhanger! and I soild recommend making Tsuna's POV ton, I wonder what he thinks of Izumi and to see if the feelings mutual~ it would be interesting to also read from the other guardians perspective too.

Hope you are doing well~ n Everyone please take care of yourself~

I love it! Next chapter pleaseeeee.

it ended to early nuuuuhuuuhuhuuuuu! T-T

Eugh

I love it! w

Gaah it’s so good! And I just love it so much

Dun dun duuuun.

Sorry, I'll leave now.

*BUSTS THROUGH THE WALL LIKE THE KOOL-AID MAN, DEBRIS SCATTERING EVERYWHERE* GOOD MORNING, GOOD AFTERNOON, GOOD EVENING, AND A VERY GOOD DAY TO YOU! Aw ye update time, my most favorite time of the day.
Sigh Izumi, Izumi how can you lie to someone with hyper-intuition? Just bite that (not a dying-will) bullet and get it over with, boy if I could reach in virtually and give her a good shake I definitely would lmao. Tsuna is probably just very concerned that she isn't willing to be honest with him.
Things are gonna boil over soon and someone's gonna get scalded real bad. But oooh spy time? Spy time. Let's spin that wheel and see who we land on :D I didn't even know you could remotely control a laptop like that, technology is incredible, isn't it?
Thank you very much for all the hard work put into this chapter! You're awesome, stay awesome. *finger guns*

My heart is just...gushing out of my ears I love Tsuna so much,,,this is so. good. You are literally healing my life right now this is exactly the kind of fic I've always been secretly hoping for I think I'm actually tearing up a bit

I am absolutely in love with this fic. Very rarely do I ever come across 27OC fics that are actually good. I love your writing, and you've made me absolutely smitten with Tsuna here. Izumi is adorable, and I think it'd be nice if she doesn't get herself too deep into the mafia... well, being in a relationship-ish with Tsuna kind of disallows that but what I mean is, if she remains mostly as a civilian.

Anywho, I love this fic. And I love you for writing it in the compelling way that you do. I'm super excited to see where this story goes, and how things will go for Izumi and Tsuna. Major kudos!

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