Reviews for Checkmate
Luh chapter 11 . 7/22
Pls i love this story update soon plssssss
Guest chapter 11 . 7/21
Oh noooo my gwaadddd! My heart is crying! Poor Usagi, poor mamoru. His demons are too dark, my silly boy!
Krys7 chapter 11 . 7/7
Updateeeeeeeee plzzzzz
Sessediz chapter 11 . 3/28
Ayyye this was so good! Great use of flashbacks, current emotions, and unsteady feelings. I'm looking forward to how it all ends
SaturnnFoxx chapter 11 . 3/23
Gah, how did I miss an update to this story?!
SaphireShimmer chapter 11 . 3/11
Gah! Mamoru you are an idiot sometimes! Lol
Love love love that there was a (nice long) update! And all the emotion and feelings and thoughts were well done. A part that particularly stuck out to me was his explanation of moving the first piece after her. To me, it was him essentially saying "I see you; someone in this world cares." Even though that wasn't explicitly stated, the way you wrote his perspective of the interaction spoke volumes more to his intent (even if he didn't know what it was)
Looking forward to the next update!
Zanahana chapter 11 . 3/3
Oh Mamoru- stop being so against yourself! I had to go back and re-read the last two chapters to remember what was going on, but it was so worth it! Please update soon!
NikkiBC chapter 11 . 3/3
Nooooooooooo!
What is going on in his head!? She wants him and he rejects her!? Gah! No!

I hope you dont make us wait another year for the second part! I have to know what he is thinking!
Guest chapter 11 . 3/3
AHHH I LOVE THIS STORY I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! This story had me so OBSESSED last year and I'm so glad you're finishing it! Thank you!
Red Lion Amaryllis chapter 11 . 2/29
My heart is racing as I finish this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens! Thank you so much for this story and this chapter. I would wait for another year and 3 months if I had to and just appreciate that you use your time to give us a story.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/28
Thank you for the excellent and exciting chapter where Usagi and her mysterious chess partner just talked and got everything out in the open. Now all they need to do is gain enough confidence to believe that the other would want them as much as they do. Hope you have a nice day.
jenna chapter 11 . 2/28
noooo a cliffhanger! It is a great story though! Very fun characterization of both Usa and Mamo! Can't wait to read the ending! (It better be happy these two deserve it ;)
phillynz chapter 11 . 2/28
Omg cliffhanger nooooo...
Tina Century chapter 11 . 2/28
Girl. Giiiirl this is amazing. I stayed up way past my bedtime to read this, and it was SO worth it. First off, I LOVE that you went straight into dialogue between the two of them. I feel like it would have been easy to have one of them run away and have all sorts of misunderstandings between them, but when Usagi pulled out that chair? PERFECT, and so in character. I also love your explanation of how Mamoru has grown upthe muscles filling out, getting better at peopling but having Usagi send him back into some of his old ways because he just can’t take it. Seriously, I felt like I was in that deserted coffeeshop with them. Your scene setting, your dialogue, your characterization is all just PERFECT. I love the flashbacks to the scenes with Mamoru and Wasureta, and all of the explanations of WHY Mamoru started playing chess with Usagi and of course he felt more secure behind a phone and a fake identity (I mean don’t we all?) and OF COURSE he would feel guilty about it. You’ve tied your entire story together so well with this chapter, and I honestly can’t wait to read it over and over. This was so worth the wait, and you’re such a damn talent and this fandom is so lucky to have you!
beets6669 chapter 11 . 2/28
Mamoru is TOTALLY his worst enemy. In every version, he is the one holding himself back. You gotta continue! I need to know where this goes! How he turns this around. Or will it be her, this time?
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