| Reviews for A Fool's Game |
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   HarpforHim chapter 1 . 6/29 This was wonderful! |
| SpaceAgeBachelor chapter 1 . 4/21 This was so cute and sweet, and then it just made my heart clench at the end. They finally TALKED and Obi-Wan just had to go be emotionally repressed again. You stupid Jedi! That being said, this is amazing and I loved reading it. |
| Katla1 chapter 1 . 1/13 "Congratulations, Anakin. I do apologise for not getting you a present." I LOLed! XD YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD! I LOVE the muddied sensations you describe (so well) at the beginning, Obi-Wan's parental anxiety as he checks for a pulse, and Anakin only hearing the tail-end of his name. Your dialogue and description are fantastic. Lines such as 'blood-slicked fingers' add SO much to this. The story is really alive. Having them both admit to their love interests was amazing. And Obi-Wan doesn't even remember what they talked about. X) Or does he? |
| SnowflakesandMozart chapter 1 . 12/29/2019 Ooh! Fun and funny and heart wrenching all together. But Obi-Wan, just admit you remember what Anakin told you already... |
| IthilwenofIthilien chapter 1 . 11/27/2018 Um, wow. Delirium sure has a way of lifting the filters one may have. I know from experience, it happened to my sister after we were in a car accident. |
| Omaiwamoe chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 WHO ARE YOU |
| Rogue Tomato chapter 1 . 5/15/2018 Just spending some time reading some of your other stories. This one was so lovely. I love the vulnerability of the two boys. |
| Iamsecretlynot chapter 1 . 5/13/2018 I started dying with laughter. |
| Ignite the Stars chapter 1 . 4/18/2018 I LOVE IT |
| TheRedScreech chapter 1 . 3/18/2018 I read it on Tumblr, but now I'm reading it here and I swear I love it even more! |
| reppad98 chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 Oh, dammit, I wish we had seen more of this. It's definitely a bit humerous, but it has the undertone of seriousness. And it's too short :P I like the tripping over sentences. Poor Anakin, and poor Obi-Wan. But almost dying together does bring people together. I wish Obi Wan had told him he remembered... I mean, the consequences of that could have been so big. And even now, Obi-Wan knows, and that could change so many things... But I understand that you keep it as an one-shot, it would be a beast of a story otherwise haha. Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it, and keep writing! ! |
| eschscholzia chapter 1 . 3/10/2018 The surprise at the end got me! I think you captured the characters very well- I could hear the VA’s saying it in my head. Thank you for the story! |
| Stardustjinn chapter 1 . 3/10/2018 Those two idiots... Obi-Wan whyyyyy |
| Artemis J. Potter chapter 1 . 3/6/2018 I found this via Tumblr and I just love the idea. It works really well as a one shot, though my writer brain can't help but wonder if you extended on this. Maybe not a full-length story, but multiple one-shots with similar settings. Anyway, I really enjoyed this! Thanks for writing :) |
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 1 . 3/4/2018 Why did Obi-Wan play dumb? I loved this story! |
