Northstar go die in a fire you evil fuckwit

Once again, this is very sweet.

perfect
misty can rot in hell

Hmm this is great though one thing to work on.

Given this is Pokemon you might what to use either Arceus or perhaps the local legendaries of the region. I mean we do have notice that in universe that people do worship them.

Take that as a bit of advice it helps the readers full like it's natural while reading :)

Yeah don't listen to that idiot. Northstar a complete jerk. This story is great and please continue with this work.

Awesome! Loved it and I look forward to read more!
And don't pay any attention to haters! They are far behind us! Amourshipping is the best!

Everything wrong with this story:
1. Where the fuck is Pikachu?
2. If this is suppost to be a drabble, it should be exactly 100 words!
3. Amourshipping.
4. It has the worst ship ever concived in it
5. This story is garbage.
6. Kill yourself.
7. Oh, and delete this garbage

Very romantic and very sweet I loved seeing ash and serana admit their love for each other and kiss