| Reviews for Dinner and Dessert |
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  Me chapter 4 . 7/23/2012 Great Story...Great Lemon Cake... and a wonderful writer! :3 |
 Nara Merald chapter 4 . 6/3/2012 Great fic- I love the angst Sousuke and Kaname would realistically face. I also love the happy ending! |
| animelover931 chapter 4 . 5/28/2012 Plz continue this was sweet and touching story that was romantic plz update! |
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 4 . 12/7/2011 So sweet! Great ending, great way to show the character development. I like the Sousuke-Kurz interaction and how you delicately but clearly show Sousuke's typical teenage struggles...in his unique and atypical Sousuke way. Beautiful writing, great fic. Thank you and congrats to a job well done! |
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 3 . 12/7/2011 Lemon cake awesome. You do a good job of leaving just enough to the imagination, and I love the way you handle flashbacks. It seems so natural and seamless. Of course, I love the Sousuke-Kaname fluff. There's not enough good SxK fiction out there, and yours is one of the good ones! Love it! |
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 2 . 12/7/2011 LOVE THIS! Kaname saying, "This is so unromantic!" I could hear her voice in my head. In the many "first time" stories here at , there's a fine line between the tacky and outrageous and the too-perfect-to-be-true. Your story is a perfect balance of fluff and believability. My favorite line is Sousuke saying, "And when you cry...I hate myself." I'd love it if he said that to me... |
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 1 . 12/7/2011 Great start! You do a good job characterizing everyone. I love the conversation between Sousuke and Melissa - two of my favorite FMP characters. Great writing, cute story, can't wait for the rest. |
| xsachi chapter 4 . 9/10/2011 I read this a long time ago and I just came across it again! Thanks so much for not deleting the story or your profile like so many other people do! |
| Pchan712 chapter 4 . 7/13/2011 Sooooo cool... |
| Madork Gunna chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 Very funny so far. Minor detail: the letters of the standard NATO alphabet for that password you're using would be alpha zulu zulu foxtrot mike papa one. |
| Miztical-Dragon chapter 4 . 2/9/2010 lol this story is so cute. Don't know why I didn't find it sooner! Justice has been served for these two! Please keep up the great work! |
| achaiah chapter 4 . 12/30/2009 one of my favorite citrusy-lemoned fanfics! loved it! |
| timelucked chapter 1 . 8/31/2009 I love this story...and i went onto Deviantart...i saw this comic called Dinner and Desserts...i thought it sounded familiar and when i read into it...it was pretty funny Great job...:) |
| Willow-Bee the Cat chapter 1 . 7/25/2009 This is really very good. And I'll admit, I like the plot. |
| Crimson Tranquility chapter 4 . 1/13/2009 Hi! I remember reading this fic a long time ago when I still didn't have an account here. It was one of my favorite fanfics ever and now I revisited it and say the same; it is one of my favorites! I loved how you made Sousuke really think about his role as a soldier and a human being, how they are two different things and how Kaname wants him no matter what. Also, absolutely love Kalinin's ending lines about good men and soldiers. Again, LOVED it! |
