I'm liking this buildup.

What's up his ass I Nancy being out of character. The SPAG could be better, though.
Cheers.

The Quote Is From Exit Wounds With Steven SegalDMX. What Year Is The Story Set In? How Old Are NancyThe Hardy’s? Reading About Them Is A Bit Like Going Back To When I Was YoungerWould Read Their Books.

Ned, I agree with Brenda's assessment of you-really like what you have set up-will impatiently wait for next story.

Thank you for the update-Ned, you are in way over your head-Frank, stay calm-Joe, you are not invisible-Carson, things will work out OK! MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Now, You shouldn't have brought Ned into the isn't that kinda doofus who would fight in such a dismal situation I sense a romance cimg up

Woah !
The plot is more realistic than most of the HB booms..Keep writing.

Hey, loved the antsy crew FFs make HB and ND too polite for young being said show the audience the time consumed in the search to build up Frank's 's good.

I will have a good Thanksgiving, and the strictest rule we have when we have any special occasion with family is that we never mention politics {even though we are all Democrats}. We talk about family, food and football. That's it. Dad and I handled the pies, and I am doing the deviled eggs {no party is complete without the eggs of the devil, appetizers and some sides. I have a bad feeling about Ned. Is he going after Nancy?

Frank, listen ti your brother-what idiot let Ned out?! Happy Thanksgiving!

Looks like Carson approves of Frank. Nancy would be a fool to keep Frank at arms' length.

It is not too often that you see Carson angry, but he can sure be intimidating. That was very good advice he gave to Frank. Goid story. Update soon

Yay, an update! Carson, you rock-love how he handled Ned. Like the idea of the trilogy-lucky me!

Awesome update!

Happy for the update-feel bad for Callie as Ned used her, but she was right about her relationship with Frank being over-Ned is an idiot. Hope updates continue.