Oh good so now I can comment on every single little thing. Cool.

Good job on the story, it’s pretty rare to find a nicely written SAO fanfic honestly, so it’s good to see one that’s still active. Keep it up

Do you mean like the voice cast that might be interesting but I’m not sure how the interactions would work. By real life I meant kiritos real life not ours.

Here's a idea try making a story evolving bringing the Sao cast into the world

I think that this story so far is really good hope you keep up the good work

U guys ready for another update? I’ll have to type it up though, knowing me it’d be another year...

I love this so much. Good work. ;)

Update soon

Ok...so I have 5 really long chapters ready and I’m too lazy to upload them rn so I’ll upload them later

Very interesting! I hope you continue soon! ʕ•ﻌ•ʔ

Please update. This story is cool!

I jus discovered an read the 3 chapters of your story so far an I must say, AWESOME! an yes make the chapters longer cause there a bit too short, no offense, they are very very very good but they need a bit of extending/extension... an as for other story ideas like ya said at the end of chapter 2, here do a creepy 1 of that kyouji twisted freak whos obsessed with Shino an wants to take her as his personal, ya know, an Kazuto an the gang must help to protect her from him an stop him an the guys hes got assisting him...

Responding to guest 1 I’m thinking only people who did damage or took damage to/from Heathcliff can use the feature of course they may find a way to let others use it but I don’t want to spoil the story

Thank god you went by the new line per new speaker with your dialogue! And oh no, poor Yui. Either they'll have to go into the virtual world to bring out Yui like in canon, or you have other plans for "transferring over" the MHCP into the real world...

Responding to guest
your right but let’s remember this is Kirito he tends to forgot about the bad things like Laughing Coffin and often needs people to remind him and help him think about things in multiple perspectives. I’m guessing he would thing about the success and not power

Creative, and having proper grammar and paragraph structure, but rather rushed. First person is a bit of an odd choice, but it would have made more sense if you drew out the events of this chapter and included a mix of dialogue and inner thoughts.

Other notes:

-Why wouldn't others around Kirito immediately start expressing their super abilities inside the hospitals, etc? I doubt that anyone would be able to cover up anything in this day of social media. The bit at the end justifies it I suppose, but it does seem a bit flimsy.

-"I realized this could make us some of the most 'successful' people in the world". A rather odd thought. Wouldn't the first thing to come to mind be something like "I realized this could make us some of the most 'powerful' people in the world" or rather "I realized this could make us some of the most 'dangerous' people in the world"? After all, Laughing Coffin players are still out there, and just imagine how many people they could murder using super powers? At the very least, the Japanese government should be able to figure out the names of all surviving SAO players via a registration database unless they used false names when making their accounts.

These are just some thoughts. As for the options on your profile, perhaps you should be more specific. What kind of Pokemon fanfic? Games or anime? Some ridiculous "betrayed" harem story? For Attack on Titan, would it be SAO players dumped in the AOT world with their game abilities? (The opposite only makes sense if the Titans would be in the virtual world only.) Sounds rather cool actually, though I think that AOT has rather been "over-done" in the crossover community.

Well whatever you do enjoy your day!