Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon love this story

Ahhh I cant wait to read about them "figuring out what this is"!

I LOVE this story please I’m begging you update it I don’t want to read more I NEED to read more! Keep up the amazing work this story is to die for!

Three days...

And here we have Maui confessing his love for Moana to Tui, I always knew Maui was true gentleman even in the movie and even it was just a friendship but well you know what I meant, and what a way to say I love to with a kiss from both sides jajajajaja so romantic.

I hope you update soon ‘cuz this story so beautiful to be stopped.

can maui come in and save moana from afu. because i would love to see him come to her recuse and beat afu to a plump

The formatting was much better this chapter yay! Afu was an interesting twist to add on top of moana's self doubt as a leader, and i really liked the reunion scene, especially maui's "thousand years" comment. Not to nitpick, but the "beds" in moana's time would have been little more than a few mats on the floor, (like the scene where tala says her last words to moana, shes in a 'bed') so there wouldnt have been much of a difference between maui laying on the bare wood and moana in her bed...either one of them could roll over in the night and wind up in the others' space. Although in the moana short "gone fishing" we did see maui using a hammock, so maybe thats what moana's in?

Im super happy youre giving this fic more attention, already i feel like this one flows better and is better paced than the breakneck speed of blossoming. I liked how you have sina and tui staying behind and giving moana her change to fly on her own as wayfinder and chief.

However i do have one criticism, and that is Please put in wider breaks around your paragraphs and dialouge. Dialouge should be formatted like this:

A few moments later, Tui parted curtain that covered the doorway and entered the hut, followed by Sina and the village council.

"Tui, why are we all here?" one of the elderly councilmen asked.

"Moana is actually in charge of this one," Tui said confidently, looking over to his daughter. She nodded and took a deep breath.

There should be a break everytime someone new is speaking. In general, this fic could use more paragraph breaks so the readers arent staring down a giant wall of text.