Demonios! Me encanta Kakaroto. Esta historia es súper genial. Me conmueve la relación de Kakaroto y Chichi. Rayos... por favor continúa por favor...

Love your story lol, so some people are thinking or wanting a GXB and as much as I think that’ll be cool I’m not really a fan of them. I also don’t see how it will end up because it will also ruin the whole story line. I get why people think they will end up together since goku 1st met bulma and I don’t know why I just find it cute if they have that sybling bond and much funnier (; lol, I also ship CXG , hehe but come on they both have a lot of chemistry it’s hard to resist them ! hope you update soon !
~toodles ;} :P

are you planning on continue it? and who is gonna goku end up with? At first I thought it was going for the goku and bulma route ! and now it's taking another route.. anyways please continue this!

I’ve been re reading this and I just hope you update! it’s been a while since you have and I don’t want to keep bugging you, but this story is just so good so hopefully you’ll come back :)

Boom! Just finished my fourth, or maybe sixth?, read through of this. Still love it. But I hear you ask, “why?” And to that my fellow author I say!
Because I wanted to remind you how great this is, and pester for another chapter, and also, I needed to step away from my own writing. Don’t you hate it when a first draft seems good only to turn to shit upon a second or third reading? Oh and even better when you’d assumed it was good enough and got half way through the following chapter...
Anyway, my dilemas aside, this is awesome and I’ll be reading it again, soon...and pestering you again...also soon.

I just read all of this and now I am wondering if the voice in chichi's head will appear and will she even tell anyone ? Also I really want to see kakarot and chichi go against each other for the final match, but than again I'd like to see Jackie Chun against chichi. Anyways I see you haven't posted in awhile so I hope you'll keep posting soon. Take care :)

I do hope you continue you’re story i have been trying to wait patiently, but I just can’t :,] anyways I really would like to see what happens to Chichi !

Writing fight scenes is tough, but don't lose the motivation! I've found they always read better once the metaphorical pen is put down.

you haven’t updated in a while ! I’m sad right now, but I know you need to take your time because you also have a life and such so it wouldn’t be fare but I really do hope you post soon !

in all honesty you are such a good writer! i love the relationship between kakarot and chichi. I really want to see how the whole story plays out with Chichi being part of the z fighters and her being a saiyan! I do hope you continue this story and good luck! :)

I really enjoyed this so far. I hope you plan on finishing this story for a lot of other authors tend to leave readers hanging ( not shading ) . I hope to see more of Kakarrot and Chichi! they’re so adorable together!

The chemistry between Kakarrot and Chi-Chi is beautiful at this point. Like I don’t even know if I can ship them romantically because of how much I’m enjoying the platonic intimacy between them. That intimacy is sure to showcase even more when the battles are life or death.

Also…Hopefully Yamcha and Chi-Chi can be friends one day. :) Kudos.

Your a very talented writer! My favorite story out of every one! I prefer to read this instead if any book ;)

my fav chichi and goku or Kakarrot and Chichi

Kakarot and Chichi are so cute together ! Bulma and Yamcha too, but I like the other couple!