Love it! Can't wait to see more!

I’m really enjoying your story so far! I hope you update soon

Can't wait to see where this is going! So glad I read authors notes and saw your story mentioned by son of the mourning, and even more glad I checked it out!

omg what are they talking about? I am so excited to read more.

oh I like where you led off! I wonder what they're talking about. I can see that he can't win an argument with his wife and he knows it lol

oh poor Ro. Bellatrix should not have done that. and what a family to have when you are not safe from your own brothers. can't wait to read more I loved this fic

oh my god poor Ro. damn you bellatrix and even her own brothers she needs protection from ? wow.

great start

Very cool story! I'm excited to see what happens next. I'm a sucker for Charlie/OC stories.

I'm really excited to see where you take this. Good storyline and plot so far for the first time. Much better then the old first timers on the site haha. Keep it up!

It's a really cool game i wish i could play. but lets face it i havent ran around in years. I love how wilhemina seems like she doesnt take nothing from no one. *snaps fingers* I wonder if rochelle will break out of her shell

Woo, intense chapter. Poor Rochelle! Must be in so much pain, blasted Bellatrix.
Great chapter!

This is an interesting story and I’m curious to how it will go

Yay an update! You did amazing with this chapter. keep it up!

Love this beginning and looking forward to the next.