Reviews for Happiness |
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VampireDraken chapter 7 . 7/24 An excellent story, I have quite enjoyed reading it and the interactions between Raven and Naruto and well played out. My only complaint is that earlier in the story you mentioned that condoms were used, and while pregnancy can still happens how you worded it when Raven found out was like she and Naruto had sex again. Other than that, looking forward to the next chapter. |
Amaterasususano chapter 7 . 7/13 Please update soon |
myafroatemydog chapter 7 . 7/13 Pretty fantastic chapter good job |
myafroatemydog chapter 6 . 7/13 Pretty fantastic chapterWell done |
myafroatemydog chapter 5 . 7/13 Pretty epic chapter |
myafroatemydog chapter 4 . 7/13 Pretty fantastic chapter |
myafroatemydog chapter 3 . 7/13 Another fantastic chapter |
myafroatemydog chapter 2 . 7/13 Good chapter |
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 7/13 Pretty good first chapter |
draculyn28 chapter 7 . 7/12 interesting, I hope to see what happens later, greetings. |
Darth revan1998 chapter 7 . 7/7 Oh god naruto now knows raven was pregnant cant wait to read what happens next |
Issei ODR chapter 7 . 7/5 Entonces su hija será contra quien tenga que pelear |
Issei ODR chapter 6 . 7/5 Si ahora deben y naruto tendrán un hijo |
Issei ODR chapter 3 . 7/5 Yo digo que su chakra tiene características demoníacas o que el puede ser corrompido para ser un ser de naturaleza negativa contra todo lo humano antes de conocer a naruto. Kurama originalmente conformaba parte del juubi un ser nacido de la energía natural del mundo y la semilla del Shinju. Su naturaleza es cambiante al pertenecer a la naturaleza, se puede corromper como chakra de energía negativa o energía demoníaca. Un kyyubi es un youkai de naturaleza demoniaca |
Issei ODR chapter 2 . 7/5 Me parece muy interesante la historia, podrías crear el contexto de que kurama era un espíritu de la naturaleza que fue corrompido por los pensamientos humanos y se volvió en ser demoniaco. |