Wish his character was more complex.

I hope Jaune can forgive Ruby and Pyrrha, but "those" three? It might be more entertaining to make them slaves.

So offense, but this story is so edgy that I could use it to shave my beard.

Still, an excellent story BTW. Really entertain to read.

I'm sorry but this is poorly written in my opinion.. you need to respect characters even though the show became crap after vol 3

Hey, just wanted to say this is a heck of a fic! Please keep up the great work!

I've always been a bit of a sucker for a good Jaune goes bad fic. Plus, who can resist an Albedo-like Cinder?

Disgusting

Ooooo Niiiiiice.

Oh god this is so good! The cliffhanger! I love it!

Absolutely loved this, I hope you continue this story.

Seemed liked it was gonna be a great one

and Sienna Khan

is it posdible to add raven to the harem

does he still have his aura and semblance

This fanfic is AWSOME and I can't wait for more of it

Dude, those three should be arrested for murder, not suffer a slap on the wrist. I'll keep reading, but I just don't feel fully satisfied about how this chapter played out.