| Reviews for Monsters Within Us |
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   CoreFinder chapter 20 . 7/17 Started when you only had like 6 ch, found it again and I really like it. Just the idea of person A goes to place, and proceeds to touch everything is pretty enjoyable for me. And now that the ‘betrayal’ happened, I can kind of see Taylor coming back and saying something like “I leave for a week so Madara left, and you’re an immortal zombie. Da fuq” it’s kinda funny that way. |
| Violante Martell chapter 20 . 2/3 Me ha encantado este fic |
| FluffyDwagy chapter 20 . 12/4/2019 poor noodles |
| Jack Inqu chapter 20 . 10/24/2019 I had completely forgotten about the resurrection jutsus they have. So Hashi isn't out of the story just yet; that's good. Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update. |
| xbox432 chapter 20 . 10/13/2019 Thank god the other Ninja aren't drinking the Koolaid... They might consider it as an option, but they're not totally convinced of the altruism of some guy they've never heard of shoving images into the head of someone before convincing them to let themselves be killed. Still, I didn't think of this before, but now that Hashirama is dead it would seem that he and Mito aren't going to get married. Thus, no Tsunade. You really ARE going off the beaten path when it comes to cannon, aren't you? :D |
| dreaddragonknight chapter 20 . 10/12/2019 Oh that is the best explanation to that OP jutsu i have ever heard about |
| Jack Inqu chapter 19 . 9/27/2019 Well, that's not good. Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update. |
| PsylentFox chapter 19 . 9/26/2019 An interesting take at the origin story of Naruto. :) |
| Kaiya Azure chapter 19 . 9/24/2019 The sad irony is that they have a communication technique that they fail to use with the right people at the best time to be sharing information. Then again, part of the problem is the fact Zetsu chose to focus solely on a future where Kaguya is revived and not on the various futures where her chosen world can survive. |
| dreaddragonknight chapter 19 . 9/22/2019 Once more communication is ignored jut like canon... in both source materials |
| Jack Inqu chapter 18 . 9/2/2019 Uh oh. Looks like Zetsu has made his move, and Taylor is in trouble again. I have no idea what will happen now. Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update. |
| vmage2 chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 "Kephri" should be "Khepri". |
| sonic chapter 18 . 8/31/2019 I liked the chapter! |
| Danget the critic chapter 14 . 8/27/2019 Yeah, no, bye. I can't stomach this kind of crap so I am just gonna leave. I will say that it is a good story but, as soon as I saw the words Toad Sage, I knew I was gonna get pissed. Like I said, it's a good story, but this is one pet peeve that I am not gonna deal with. |
| frankieu chapter 18 . 8/25/2019 nice chapter thx for writing it |
