Uh... Okay...

Thanks for the very good read are you going to carry on if not then thanks again for the read if yes then I will look forward to the next instalment and link.

i was wondering if you are going to write anymore chapter to this story i need to know what happens

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapters. Please continue. You have most definitely caught my attention.

So well written. Very similar to E.L James. Please continue maybe with some more random au stuff. xx Abby

new reader to your story...What was Jack thinking? he could break into Christian's house and kidnap Ana...fool ..with all that Security did he really think he would get away with it...Even Christian knew his house was compromised...until you post again

I truly like this story, and even if you don't know where to go with it you definitely have a good start. So I do hope that you continue with it, and I agree with your statement it is supposed to be fun.

Cada capítulo é melhor que o outro. Ansiosa para ler sobre o próximo.

I totally agree this is fanfiction site supposed to be fun grammar/spelling is nice HOWEVER it should not be criticize and vicious like you said this is NOT an English paper. By the way awesome story, can't wait for more.

Interesting want more

More pls and soon

Who's Layla? Do you mean Leila?

awesome story. can't wait for more

Great start. Makes me want to read more!

Great story