Ok but you are a great book writer but you haven't written any more yet and I think a lot of people are wondering why you are going to do so good luck

I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

Updateeeeeede

where are thy updates

Oh MY GODS I AM LOVING THIS

Thanks
Hope for more
King Plasma of Plasmadom

compassionate ash?
sounds like normal ash to me, unless we talkin' a different kind of 'compassionateʖ

yes. i like the direction this is headed. keep up the good work. altho. i find it a bit difficult to read with random spaces between paragraphs and pov switching. i think sticking to a More general pov might be better

Cynthia must have the love-obsession on Ash.

Known fact: Mew loves head scratches.

Gasp!

Will we see some limes scenes and lemon with ash, Serena, Cynthia, and diantha.

Your title is misspelled, it should be “The Chosen One’s Odyssey”.

Also, you cut off and space out sentences erratically.

Well, I’m curious to see how this story plays out.
Do you think that Ash can acquire Froakie and Ash-Greninja early?

Not bad concept for a story, though it needs a little work on the structure, as you separate and space the endings of each paragraph rather prematurely, with certain parts spaced inappropriately.

Chapters could be a little longer, as half your chapter is your AN.
Bulk up the length of the actual chapter to at least 4K.

But other than that, great story. Can’t wait to see how this plays out.

looks good please update

Not bad so far back the chapters could be longer