| Reviews for Don't Mess With An Arc |
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   Tryson chapter 2 . 11/26/2019 Insert Vegeta”MY PRIDE!” |
| The Great Lae chapter 1 . 1/16/2019 Hmph, typical Shonen protagonist. Always a dumb one with OP powers. *Sigh* why the hell the protagonist always a dumbass like Luffy, Natsu, Naruto, and many others!? I hate dumbass. I wish there is a smart OP protag with a ruthless personality. |
| Dr. Valentine chapter 12 . 1/16/2019 I wouldn't say this was the best story, but I am sad to see it go. Still, I understand and respect you for your reasoning. I'll be sure to check out whatever you replace this with. |
| Martvill chapter 12 . 1/15/2019 well... it was good while it lasted i really liked the story. |
| Sentinel103 chapter 12 . 1/15/2019 When writing an 'Uber' character I think that it is very hard to make it work. Everyone has weaknesses, Stan Lee was able to make Spiderman work because the webslinger had human weaknesses. I always make sure my characters have some human frailties. If it looks like mine are 'god like' eventually they will appear to be less to even if it takes a ton of words. Characters have to evolve. And how can you keep saying 'this guy is the strongest' at anything, you just can't work out development. ST-103 |
| Harbinger Of Destruction chapter 12 . 1/15/2019 "Sigh" and so ends another good fic. |
| merendinoemiliano chapter 12 . 1/15/2019 Sorry, dude. Happy new year. |
| Xerzo LotCN chapter 12 . 1/14/2019 aww thats so sad... |
| Xealchim chapter 12 . 1/14/2019 Hey you recognized it more power to you |
| The Lazy Dragon chapter 12 . 1/14/2019 It's ok author you tried but atleast your making a another story to make it up for it. But I'm glad you made it in the first place |
| Hecseferblade chapter 11 . 11/7/2018 Chapter 11 was beautiful, Jaune learns a valuable lesson, the students learn that no matter what, ozpin is headmaster for a reason, and ozpin found someone he can spar with while finally being able to mostly go all out |
| Ruberforumfree chapter 2 . 11/3/2018 Oh man, I love this jaune arc XD If there were more OP Jaune RWBY fiction out there... |
| Mo Eazy chapter 11 . 10/29/2018 Cinder killed Ozpin. You’re gonna have to take that into account going forward by making Maidens obscenely powerful. Which means altering canon to make Cinder and company more deadly, and You should. If the story follows canon despite having Superman on campus, that’s a problem. Changes should cause changes. |
| tonytaker chapter 11 . 10/29/2018 Nice didn't see that coming keep going |
| hirshja chapter 11 . 10/28/2018 The guy below me said it best, and I think part of the reason is because of the rotation that you are working. Leaving an indefinite amount of time between chapters is a never a good idea. |
