I get feels from this story

This was pretty and heartwarming, but also bittersweet. Good job!

Please add more to this, I love it

I like this chapter and I hope that you will make a sequel.

Some grammar and spelling mistakes. I would recommend a Beta (seriously, I ignored all the suggestions I got for months, but once I did the quality of my work skyrocketed on all fronts).
Other than that, and interesting and original story :-) Any chance of expanding upon it?

this went in my favorites:)

Hola.
Interesante. un escenario diferente y aunque algo triste por lo que implica, bonito.
Siempreeee Dickieeeee

Omg, that was so adorable, I loved every second of it.

Wow...this was really sweet!