Reviews for One Big Happy Family |
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Guest chapter 8 . 1/28/2019 This would've been a great story had it been properly written with correct grammar and punctuation. |
Hatter1999 chapter 23 . 12/27/2018 What?! This cant be the end. |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 22 . 12/21/2018 Love it |
DxGRAYxMAN chapter 22 . 12/21/2018 T_T |
Paula Anna chapter 18 . 11/4/2018 Poor Bella...she just wants everyone to be happy. I hope she soon understands that she would be causing greater pain for Edward if she just ups and leaves. |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 18 . 11/4/2018 Love it |
ClaceLover08 chapter 17 . 10/24/2018 i want more please i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love when Bella & Edward hang out together |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 16 . 10/16/2018 Love it |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 15 . 10/9/2018 Love it |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 14 . 10/1/2018 Love it |
SuBeskreus chapter 14 . 10/1/2018 Ok, I had a really hard time reading this chapter, I didn't know who was saying what, the point of view of the character was so mixed up that first I thought Bella was talking, but then I saw her name in a third point of view, but in the same line she was including herself? Really it's an interesting story but please! Check in what point of view you want to write :'( |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 13 . 8/21/2018 Love it |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 12 . 7/5/2018 Love it |
orchidluv chapter 11 . 6/29/2018 Definitely needs some betaing but I really like this. Awesome that there's other shifters out there! |
TWILIGHT1978 chapter 11 . 6/29/2018 Love it |