Reviews for Devil's Due
SpiderxCat chapter 30 . 6/21
are you going to be doing KOTFE and KOTET also Onslaught. because i would want to see how it will all play out BTW love the story!
Ericdragon chapter 30 . 5/4
I really liked this chapter. It seems murlesson's still got it.
Ventores chapter 30 . 5/4
Hah, it seems the italics really caused inconvenience to the author)
Shaddurak chapter 30 . 5/4
nice chapter about returning to power but question does he still have all the power he stole from the ghosts or did the power leave him when he killed them?
Ventores chapter 29 . 4/21
Wonderful chapter. It may sometimes seem that Murlesson will indeed perish.
It is very pleasant that the chapter came out so quickly.
Ventores chapter 28 . 4/10
Continued out? Cool!)
uchiha cat chapter 28 . 4/10
For the first time ever I think I truly despise a cliffhanger. The fight with Giri was amazing and I loved seeing things through Aristherons eyes for a chapter as it gave a good understanding of how he views everything. I am somewhat confused as to how exactly Murlesson possession works though. As it never got that far in game I’m curious are all the ghosts sharing or are they all fighting for control separately? I can’t wait for the next chapter I am dying to see how they save Murlesson. Amazing writing as always and keep up the good work.
Ericdragon chapter 26 . 1/15
I find your lack of faith in a cure disturbing. But I shall trust you...for now.
uchiha cat chapter 26 . 1/15
I've loved the story so far so I have no problem trusting you with it further. I am not entirely sold on the whole disease not being curable thing so I'm not sure how you will do Voss but again you've done amazing so far so I have no doubt you will continue to do well. I am curious to know if you will do the Khem/Zash quest and if so which one Murlesson would choose because as loyal as Khem is he doesn't have the knowledge and research capabilities of Zash. once again an Amazing chapter and I can't wait to see the rest of this story. I also kind of wish we could tell which Ghost was speaking when they speak because that is getting somewhat annoying to not be able to tell or is Murlesson himself also not usually able to tell who is speaking? also I may have missed it when you said but I'm really curious as to what music is on Murlesson's playlist. as always I eagerly await the next chapter.

UchihaCat
uchiha cat chapter 24 . 1/14
good lord your updating faster then i have time to read and i love it. this was an amazing chapter and once again you show what separates your story from others as you show the political struggles and the bureaucratic nightmare that is leadership. i love the amount of detail and thought you put into this and i love the way you portray everyone. However if i were to have any criticism it would be that Murlesson isn't more focused on curing himself of the effects of the forcewalking rituals he did with so many ghosts. with that said I think that this is easily the best SWTOR story ever written and i have read just about every single one on this site. I also love the way you portray Xalek and I love seeing the Dark council involved. also looking forward to the fight with aristheron against Kel Reu Giri. as always i eagerly await the next chapters.
Ericdragon chapter 24 . 1/13
Ooh I can't wait for the fight agenst giri. Hope they finally kill him.
uchiha cat chapter 23 . 1/13
Your spoiling us with the rapid updates. And once again I find myself in awe of your brilliant writing and how you managed to make Pyron so relatable as a character and how you really go in depth about how people view Murlesson. I will say I think they should be a little more concerned about his “Episodes” but honestly I feel like Pyron is just looking for anyone better then his current superiors. I also love the way you are portraying Xalek and I’m curious as to how his character will develop. Another amazing chapter and as always I eagerly await more.

Uchihacat
RMT1161 chapter 22 . 1/12
Another great chapter!
uchiha cat chapter 22 . 1/12
An amazing chapter as always. I especially love the way you portray Pyron. I am somewhat curious though as to how Xalek will fit in with everyone and I completely agree the way he was introduced was extremely forced and rushed. I love all the politically wheeling and dealing that Murlesson does because that is what the inquisitor should truly be like. The most interesting thing for me in this chapter is that Murlesson is showing how different he is from most sith by understanding the desire for Pyron to have his family safe and I’m curious if that is truly him or is that still him just bending Pyron to his will. Either way I eagerly await the next chapter as always.

Uchihacat
Ericdragon chapter 22 . 1/12
Well that was a cliffhanger.
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