| Reviews for To Stand Alone |
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   x7porkchop123w chapter 1 . 6/24 good story tho |
| x7porkchop123w chapter 1 . 6/24 damn u I am now left with so much emptiness |
| Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 23 . 6/6 I cried from the pure fluff this contained. I wish I could give you a more favourites, but I guess I have to settle on just giving one. |
| Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 21 . 6/6 "I love you, nii-sanYou're insufferable", She loves him! He loves her! This sibling relationship is so perfect! A hundred out of ten! |
| Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 18 . 6/6 He's blushing! He's such a good brother! Gaah, God, I love their love . |
| Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 14 . 6/6 And he's worried about her liking boys! KYAAAAA THIS IS SO CUTE |
| Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 14 . 6/6 …Orochimaru…laughing…ugh, it's to cute…メ) |
| Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 10 . 6/6 Oh god, this is so cute. Like seriously, her interactions with Orochimaru made my heart squeeze out sugar. I almost cried over that cute fluffiness. *places hand over heart and squeezed* Ungh . |
| totoro27110 chapter 36 . 6/4 wait a minute... |
| totoro27110 chapter 36 . 6/4 lord for a second I thought the book ended here |
| Spidersauce chapter 21 . 5/29 This story was getting better, but now the damn flashbacks and insanity is becoming more and more prevalent. I realjze your entire purpose in writing this is those flashbacks, but it's just so nonsensical that it's becoming a chore to read just in hopes it gets better later . . . But maybe that's just me. |
| Spidersauce chapter 20 . 5/29 So they're finally addressing that she's so mentally fucked up because she WANTS to be. She CHOOSES to be broken, to live in the past. To insult the dead and the living both by living a half life, refusing to actually live the new life she has, desperately clawing at the pretence of having her old life back. Honestly she needs to get a reality smack in the face, have Orochi nearly die because of her choice to dive in her delusions, or similar. The fact that they're realizing she chooses to be insane and are still letting her damage herself so greatly is a bit weird though. |
| Spidersauce chapter 17 . 5/29 So Uzumaki seals speak to her. Or just advanced enough seals maybe? |
| Spidersauce chapter 16 . 5/29 She lies to herself. She doesn't reminisce. That's controllable- Haruka isn't shown as being able to control her flashbacks at all (or maybe she just refuses to even try?). |
| Spidersauce chapter 15 . 5/28 I've never liked how Yamanka get to just invade and everyone is just defenseless. That doesn't make sense to me. It should be a battle for it not a complete submission. I honestly didn't think a mind walk would do anything but kill the Yamanka, or break their mind. |
