| Reviews for Rewrite the Stars |
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  Guest chapter 14 . 7/18 Android 18 Erasa or android 21 might be Gohan pairing I do not know can you tell us please |
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/26 Who is Gohan love interest I know it's not videl |
 The Rocha chapter 13 . 4/27 Love to see our heroes bonding. Gero knowing about alternative timelines is a big game changer. That means he will be active now, not passive. The timeline will change a lot. More Androids? Oolong is embracing his inner chad. Poor Mirai. Its pretty obvious why he feels so bad - he is seeing Yamcha having the lide he never could. Someone needs to remind him about New Namek - he can get back some of what he lost. Just go to Future New Namek, ressurect Future Piccolo (therefore Kami), use two other wishes to ressurect more people. Alternatively, he has to learn to move on. Gero seems to have committed a mistake. And there comes Android 13! Look at his trucker hat. |
| The Jingo chapter 13 . 4/12 Thanks for the fic |
| annegoddamn chapter 13 . 4/9 Oooh, getting right to the action! Always a nice change of pace when a retelling fic mixes it up, a bit. Can't wait to see what else you do with this! Going to be really exciting. Great work as always, my friend! Keep it up! |
| annegoddamn chapter 12 . 4/9 Finally catching up on this, sorry, lol. Great work as always! The techniques you came up with were really interesting. I could never do come up with any of that. And yay, Bra's finally here! Poor Mirai's probably angsty like mad. |
| The Legendary Dragon Reaper chapter 13 . 3/25 Great chapter, hard to believe it’s been 2 years. Nice to know this story is still progressing well despite these uncertain times. |
| Sophielovesdb chapter 12 . 1/16 waiting for the next chapter |
| Sophielovesdb chapter 8 . 1/15 ur fic has been good so far. My guess for Gohan's pairing is Bra... |
| Knightwing20042 chapter 12 . 1/7 I only recently found this story and have been absolutely loving it. The pokemon inspired moves really bring out the Pokemon fan boy in me. But the weaponized blood move that Gohan uses immediately made me think of Skarlet from the Mortal Kombat. I wouldn't recommend looking her moves/fighting style if you have a weak stomach or can't handle gore. |
| annegoddamn chapter 11 . 9/29/2019 Definitely going to be interesting to see how Vegeta ends up playing into the narrative. Maybe King Kai will humble him a bit more. Hey, if you wanna go down the romance route, Mirai's right there, lol jk. And I think you already know my thoughts on more Piccolo - the more the merrier. Though he's still in his 'only Gohan matters' phase, but I think that'll extend to the others, eventually. And the Yambul's cute, as always. Great chapter as always, my friend! Keep it up! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2019 im glad someone pointed out how big of a flirt bulma was back then,even eyeing someone married with a kid..it time to give yamcha some love |
| Titanfire999 chapter 11 . 9/15/2019 Love the update! Can't wait for the Droids. |
| annegoddamn chapter 10 . 8/11/2019 Definitely interested to see what you're doing with Vegeta. King Kai's almost a father figure to him, now. Yeah, I agree with you about his arc in the show being kind of rushed. But, Dragon Ball's never been that concerned with the details, so what are you gonna do. Great work as usual, my friend! Keep it up! |
| Anonymously96 chapter 10 . 6/8/2019 Goku as a fpssj could barely harm pikon, who manhandled super perfect cell meaning he was at least at kid Gohan ssj2 level How could Vegeta even barely harm him is something I am unable to understand Other than that nice chapter Update soon |
