Reviews for Left Behind
MagicIceDragon chapter 3 . 3/29
Coran at least you fucking cafe about lance
Hannah Ireland chapter 4 . 3/20
I know you said that you've been busy and all, but I love your story and I would love it if you updated more of the story.
JoyceGibson chapter 1 . 8/17/2019
Hun, you have to be straight forward with your friends.I know this is late, and you probably have new friends by now, but I am in the same position right now. I'm supposed to be the happy, funny one who's position all the time, but after getting invited to go places only to be ignored over and over again, I started being straight forward. If one of them texted me if they wanted to go hang out, I say 'No. You'll ignore me. I'm cool." If I am out with them and they leave me behind, I either go to them or they end up finding me. If they ask where I was, I say "You guys forgot so I decided to do my own thing." I know this might not seem like much to you, but being straight forward might help you feel better. For me, it helped me stop thinking about others before thinking about myself. Honestly, now I act like an asshole but that's because my friends were adsholes, so they deserve to be ignored for a week or two.
But you don't have to do this if you don't want to. It's just a small tip in a big paragraph! And I hope you find better friends in the future. I'm personally hoping I can find new friends in highschool since there are people from all over the place, so I can meet others. But seriously, try being straight forward and things will be easier. Have a nice day/night!
jenae potter chapter 4 . 4/24/2019
you are so amazing at writing I love it.
gihihi chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
I hope you choose to continue this one day, they have to get him back
Chishio Ame chapter 4 . 1/13/2019
Poor Lance, I hope if you continue this that the team finds him soon.
DaMysteryNinja chapter 4 . 12/15/2018
mY bAbY nO I LOVE YOU SKSKS YOURE WORTH IT THEYLL COME EVENTUALLY SKSKSKKS THEYRE JUST DUMBOS WHORE TRYING TO USE THEIR BRAINS AND HEADS AND GAH IM SO SORYYY

also nice element with the water! Geez I was feeling for him there,like agh, if that was me,,,,,,Idek I like to think I wouldn't give in especially because I'm like constantly in pain like idek but agh I'm living through this with Lance WHY DO I HAVE SUCH AN ACTIVE CRUEL IMAGINATION SKSKSKKSKS

I LOVED THISSSSSSSSSSSS
I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU
I LOVE LANCE MORE THAN ANYTHING AND I WANT TO TELL HIM
I WANT TO HOLD HIMMMMMMMMMMM

ALSO I WANT TO KNOW WHAT KEITH THINKS WHEN HE FINDS OUT LANCE IS GONE O_o OOFIE I HOPE YOU COME BACK

DONT BE DEAD OR ANYTHING

ALTHOUGH WAIT SO YOU GRADUATED LAST YEAR...RIGHT? WAIT OML I DONT HAVE GOOD INFO RIGHT NOW MY BRAIN IS FRAZZLED AGH BUT ARE YOU LDS? OR IN COLLEGE? OR DEAD? AGH MY BRAIN I CANT EVEN THINK RN LOL

I HOPE YOURE DOING OKAY AND THAT YOURE ALIVE AND WELL

XXOOOXXXOOOXX
DaMysteryNinja chapter 3 . 12/15/2018
uHM NO SHIRO NO ALLURA STOP GUYS DONT DO THIS TO LANCE AT LEAST LIKE FIND A WAY TO COMMUNICATE OR SOMETHING IDK BUT LIKE HES GONNA THINK AND ITS LIKE OML IM GONNA HYPERVENTIALTE AND I ALREADY AHVE AND OH NO

OF COURSE CORAN NOTICE LANCE IS GONE FIRST THEIR RELATIONSHIP IS GOALS ESPECIALLY IN FANFICS IM LIKE YES (OKAY SO ADMITTION TIME I ACRUALLY HAVENT GOTTEN THROUGH EVEN *SEASON 2* YET BECAUDE EVEEYTINE I TRY TO WATCH I GET ALL NEEDY FOR LANCEYLANGST BECAUSE THEYRE ALL SO MEAN IM JUST LIKE GR AND IM SLOWLY GETTING THROUGH IT AND THEN IM WATCHING LIKE 6 OTHER TV SHOWS AT THE SAME TIME AS WELL AND IM LIKE AGH AND I HAVE DIFFERENT FRIENDS FOR EACH ONE AND THEYRE ALL LIKE WATCH WATCH WATCH AND IM LIKE read read read? AND ITS LIKE AGH

BUT HUNKKKKKKK MY BOOOOO YOUR TURD NUGGET IN A HALF FOND TONE BECAUSE NO YOU ONLY NOTICE WHEN YOU NEED HIM LIKE NO STOP

PIDGE WHY YOU NOT FREAKING OUT HARDCORELY ID BURST INTO TEARS WITH HUNK LIKE OML

KEITHHHHHH MY BOOOOOO (IS THIS GONNA BE KLANCE? KLANGST? PLZ SAY YES? WELL I MEAN IF YOU DECIDE TO FINISH OR CONTINUE THIS OR WHATEVER IT SEEMS YOU HAVENT BEEN ACTIVE IN MONTHS (I legit took the time to go and see when you last updated anything and August? :"""(((((?) I STILL LOVE YOU THO EVEN IF YOU NEVER SEE THIS HEH (IM SO EMBARASSING IDEK)

OKAY BUT THIS WAS PAINFUL I WAS WAITING FOR LANCES NAME TO SHOW UP AND I SCROLLED JUST WAITING TO SEE HOW LONG IT TOOK THEM AND I WAS LIKE ? EXCUSE ME MY YOUNG CHILDREN? NO? EXCUSE YOURSELVES PLZ?

BUT ANYWAY LOVED THIS
STILL LOVE YOU AS WELL XD
STILL LOVE LANCE
AND YES THIS IS APART OF MY COMMENTARY ROUTINE SO DONT JUDGE MEH

XXOOXXOOXXOOXX
DaMysteryNinja chapter 1 . 12/15/2018
Also that was me whoops totally forgot I'd logged out so I could break the system on your last story xD
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2018
YOU MATTER TO MEEEEE
LANCE AND YOU MY FAVORITE AUTHOR
LITERALLY
IM CHOKING WITH LANCE
I DONT EVEN KNOW YOU AND I CAN HONESTLY SAY HANDS DOWN I LOVE YOU LIKE OML IF I KNEW YOU IRL ID NEVER LET YOU GO LIKE YOUD GET SO PISSED BECAUSE ID LATCH ONTO YOUR ARM AND GO **THE FRICK BACK INSIDE WITH YOU BECAUSE YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SHOULDNT HAVE BEEN MAKING YOU GO IN AND GET ALL THE DRINKS LIKE EXCUSE ME NO I WOULD HAVE VEEN LIKE YO WANT ME TO GO WITH YOU AND THEN YOUD HAVE BEEN LIKE NAH BRO ITS GOOD AND ID BE LIKE ILL GO IF YOU WANT ME TO AND YOUD BE LIKE ITS ALL GOOD AND ID BE LIKE AIGHT IM COMING AND LIKE IK THIS CUZ I DO WITH THIS MY FRIENDS ALL THE TIME LIKE NO I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT TO ME ANS I NEVER CALL EM OUT BUT NUH UH THAST NOT HAPPENING TO ANYONE ELSE BUT IM ONLY ONE FREAKING MYSTERY IN THIS WORLD FULL OF LITERAL TURD NUGGETS NOT NY FOND VERSION OF IT SO NO**
OKAY THAT WAS A LONG RANT AND THIS PROBS HAPPENED FOREVER AGO BUT IDEC BECAUSE YOU MATTER TO ME LIKE I ACTUALLY REALLY NEED THIS STORY RN AND MPH LIKE IDEK THIS IS PROBABLY WEIRD FOR YOU IMMA GO NOW AND READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
LOVED THIS CHAPTER
I STILL LOVE YOU
AND I STILL LOVE LANCE
AND YAGA
ILL BE BAWK

XXOOXXOOXXOOXX
NekojinQueen chapter 4 . 10/15/2018
omg, so good! please update soon!
JustARandomNerd chapter 4 . 8/14/2018
This is really good! Please keep writing!
That1-fan-girl-yea chapter 4 . 6/29/2018
So amazing, I yelled at the paladins for not noticing they were missing Lance. Please post more I just can't wait
Pluviophile15 chapter 4 . 6/21/2018
That’s the worst thing ever to do to Lance. Insane. I need the fifth chapter, like, five minutes ago, bc the suspense is going to kill me.
NightCourtRuby chapter 4 . 6/17/2018
:C
I want more! XD Why do we hurt our precious boy this way?!
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