Really liked it

Damn, good story! I loved the way you portrayed the characters of Tim and Gibbs. And I hope you will write more fictions about them together. I really love them together, and I love stories that are about them as lovers or as a father/son duo. They are actually really so much alike, but I really love them being together.

And I wish and love Tim as a father figure.

Is the sequel out already? Good story and the plot is pretty tight. I think you said it was a first story? If I remember right you did a really pro job.

great story!
is there a sequel?

Oh so close!
Bonus points for getting the "s" on Johns, but you lose a point for putting it in Boston (it's in Baltimore, MD - used to hang out there).

Enjoying the story though!

Yay Maddie, Yay team!

Love Gibbs holding Tim's hand...and oh yeah, the case is interesting too.

Aw, Timmy. Love Gibbs' hands-on approach. And a kidnapping, yikes.

McGibbs, yay! Great first chapter, can't wait to find out what's going on. Thanks!

Had to re-read it. Loved it and asks for more...
would be nice seeing some "sequels" to this story.

My friend, thank you for assuring me that my reviews weren't lost somewhere because of a problem on the page. As sad as the death of a mother was, I loved this story and the support the team gave to McGee. Tim's life seems to be a little bit complicated with him being trapped between his work, his kids's-and Carrie's- needs, his apartment and his relationship with Gibbs. Gibbs is not known to be a patient man in general but I'm happy that you are making him wait for the right moment-which seems to have come ;)-. I'm particularly satisfied that Eric was killed by an inmate, he got what he deserved in my opinion. As much as I disliked Lisa, I hope that she'll be able to get the help she needs. I already feel sorry for her kids who are raised by Mary though LOL ! I can hardly wait to read the sequel and your other story ! Take care, and by the way Happy Easter to you and your family..

Finally time for Tim and Jethro

I can imagine Gibbs not being happy about McGee choosing to live with Carrie and Maddie but I gather that they will find a solution once those first weeks after those horrible events will be over. Maddie and Carrie-alone with their unborn son-should come first and Gibbs understands that. I laughed at Tony's reaction to catching both men making out on the couch ! It's impossible not to get angry at Hannah's parents-to the mother for treating her daughter the way she did and to the father for not standing up to his wife and supporting his daughter. David seems to a jerk, at least he didn't go further than hitting Tim with the book and it's good that Tim got rid of him immediately after David hurt him. I wonder if David got jealous or was relieved to see Tim with another man, he seemed to be relieved. Cheers.

I'm really enjoying this story please can you continue

i like this story alot i love where your going with this . cant wait to see what comes next.
sharon