nooo luffy. Dragon must be so worried.

Don't quite think it has sunk in Luffy disappeared yet hahaha... Poor slaves group or whoever they are. Not sure whats worse. Dealing with Puffy for a couple hours or being found by a pissed off Dragon

I love this story it keeps me interested and I can't wait for you to write more.

oh gosh.. this is precious, i like Female Luffy Story.. and this is One of them. please keep going. Like your works

jjajajajaa, no me habia reido asi en mucho tiempo

I like how Dragon is a doting father. Please continue.

Can't wait for more

Nice chap
I'm really excited to see another chap

Okay the story flow is a little choppy and confusing but it really seems like a great story.

if you could break the big blocks of texts into chunks of paragraphs it'd be ten times easier to read.