Reviews for Rise of the emperor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That's it this is so anti-climactic |
![]() ![]() The story is strange and interesting. |
![]() ![]() you should continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() vamos continualo arriba el emperador naruto jajaja (me pregunto si haras a sasuke viviendo bajo un puente, tambien que le esperra elfuturo a la fangirl rosa jajajaja) |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry but i dont read kushina/anybody except naruto so imma drop this |
![]() ![]() ![]() id enjoy it better if kushina wasnt a whore |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jajajajj amigo yo creo que te equivocaste un poco ahí, eso en sierto sentido no es hipocresía, es en la forma en que uno se sentirá al saber que su mujer está con otro hombre y si me quieres decir que el hombre tiene varias mujeres ese es un buen punto, pero eso no es hipocresía porque 'ellas' aceptarían estar con el porque tienen sentimientos por esa persona y de verdad lo aman, no por un simple placer de un momento |
![]() ![]() Keep this going it interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
![]() ![]() OMFG You have the audacity to talk about fairness when you use the word "harem" and "emperor" in the same descriptions? It's fair if a woman sleeps around in a FUCKING HAREM? So it's okay I emptied my balls in your mother after bitch smacking her and spitting in her face? Or the fact that she kept yapping about regretting not aborting you during the aftersex pillow talk? Heh, maybe I'll fuck a baby in her that wouldn't get kicked out and now lives in a truck like the pathetic cuck shit you are. Good riddance to bad trash. I'll praise your mothers decision the next time she's riding my cock while deliriously calling me daddy. And you say you'll make this into the biggest piece of literature? More like you'll make it to the "pathetic cocksucker found dead in truck after killing himself" headline in a forum post. Try not to bend your back outta wack attempting to suck your own "cock". You don't want to look to crooked and pathetic if ever hang yourself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good so far, some interesting stuff. The fate of the Uchiha clan is hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cuck faggot kys |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the plot of the story and it seems fairly well written. I realize it’s a fanfiction but I can’t find myself believing a character as proud and brash as Kushina would be okay sleeping with other people, and the fact that Naruto in this story is super possessive would find that arousing.. if anything I feel like his reaction made him seem kinda seem like a cuck, when he is self proclaimed emperor at the moment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, I loved it. please continue |