Sucks ,, regret redit

Wondefull ending to this fic! It has been fun to read and follow, and nice to see such a nice conclusion.
Thanks for writing this fic from beginning to end!

Thank you for the story and I wish you well in the future.

Not a huge fan of ranma going back after all that work toward accepting things. Also not sure if this is meant to be the end.

Okay, I missed this so far, but I just caught up, and I'm really liking the story. Which means I'm going to start with criticisms. It's not that I don't like it, it's that everything has room for improvement, and that's usually where I start.

First of all, I like the way Ranma's backstory is filled in, which explains the development in his character. Because in the canon, Ranma never reacted this well to being locked. Of course, he did have his revelation at Jusenkyo that the curse was now a part of him, and you even went as far as having Ranma admit that he wasn't really sure if he was serious. But he was obviously thinking about it, and so the calmer attitude seems to fit with his inner dialog.

Akane also reacted well to the change. At first, she was concerned and suspicious, but she would be, given all the mind altering magic that has influenced Ranma before. Once she realized that Ranma was still Ranma, and wasn't becoming an extreme parody of femininity, she worked out for herself what that means for her relationship with him. And since Ranma had become more understanding of her anyway, that's a good thing.

So as I like to say, this Ranma isn't canon Ranma, but she can still be *A* Ranma who develops naturally from that shallow outward persona. You've gone realistically from that place to this one.

My second issue is that a lot of resolution takes place off screen. Whenever you have a reason for the characters to change, like Akane coming to grasp with the fact that she is attracted to both Ranma's male form and her female one, she just says she sat down and worked it out. You could even have wrapped the scene in a flashback if necessary. While it's nice to see everyone work out their problems, it just seems too easy.

That's it for the criticisms though. I like that Ranma returned to his male form in this chapter, which suggests that his "true form", which the ritual was supposed to reveal, is not a single form. He's so used to the curse that he has embraced both. Of course, returning to female form to kiss Akane implies that as far as both of them are concerned, that is the form they are most comfortable with. But Akane is not going to have to give up anything.

I'm not sure if this was supposed to be the end. Is there an epilogue coming, or further developments. I kind of hope for the latter, as it will be interesting to see how Genma and Nodoka develop, or if Nodoka develops. They really are the only conflict left in the story since Ukyo and Shampoo are out of it, unless you decide the play up the Ryoga smitten angle.

Pretty darned good, even with the typos and wrong homophones.

So, is this complete or will there be more? This is a true stopping point, so I'll be fine with either.

Thanks. This is about the best "inner workings of Ranma's personality" story that I've read.

Auto-correct is EVIL. Turn it off and use the spell/grammar check, then actually look at the suggestions to pick the right one. If it has a check for "commonly confused words" and auto-correct is turned on, the check will ALWAYS pick the top choice whether or not it is actually correct. For homophones with three or more possibilities (e.g. there, their, they're and your, you're, yore), auto-correct will roll through all of them each pass.

Typos that result in correctly spelled but wrong words are just about impossible for a machine to detect. The best ways to find them are 1) put the work away for at least 24 hours (a week is better) then read it aloud slowly; and 2) have someone else read it aloud back to you slowly, enunciating all punctuation, and pay attention.

English has so many conflicting rules that no machine can accurately and always figure out what the author was trying to say, unless the author is trying to write for grades three and under. Sentences can be constructed in ways that are "legal" but confusing and still be "proper English." Words that were only nouns ten or more years ago can now be verbs, "impact" for example, and vice versa.

Rite tu reed is great for up through grade two, but sooner or later an author needs to learn their craft, whether for writing fiction or inter-office memos. It is a continual learning process for all of us.

I like what I've been reading so far. Thanks and keep up the good work.

Good and interesting chapter!

This is great. I hope it will continue.

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.

A most excellent fanfic. Party on, dude.

It is good to see that Ranma is starting to work things out. I wish him luck and success.

This poor girl needs a break.

I like this. its really well done and I think you've taken an angle to this kind of plot no one else has or in this specific way... I cannot wait to see where you take this story

Good two chapters obviously