Okay. I was actually planning to give a review after I finish the existing chapters. However, I really want to comment on it now before I lose track of my thoughts.

First of all, there are many grammatical errors. I don't really know if the others were typo errors or it's just simply a consequence of your imagination and thoughts coming on too fast. And second, your way of writing dialogues were/are confusing. For instance, you have Draco speak a statement or a question but Hermione's answer is not written right after that question/statement. You change POVs too often though that's not a problem, it is just your style of changing that makes it confusing and annoying sometimes. Let's say in one paragraph, you have Draco's POV and within that is all his thoughts on that one scene. then on the next paragraph, you have Hermione's POV and all her thoughts which are a mirror of the previous paragraph belonging to Draco's. It is actually like putting one character's POV/paragraph on the left page and then putting the next one (which is another POV) on the adjacent page. Then repeat. Alternating is what it is which makes readers confused and lost (I don't really know what the others think about this style but this is how it made me feel). I mean, it's not a bad thing but it's the first time I've stumbled upon this kind of writing style. It's unusual. Good thing I easily noticed the pattern from the first few chapters.

BUT. contrarily, I would like to complement the author for having thought of this idea and plot. Your story is deserving of good points too as it is actually creative. I think you've actually created a beautiful mix of ideas, not focusing on just one, and brought them all together to create something one of a kind. I love that Dramione's relationship is gradual and not rushed as well as giving highlight on their success career-wise. There are stories out there that actually make wonderful ideas about Dramione's careers but somehow get lost along the way as relationship drama ensues. Though eventually it get backs on track, sometimes they just have limited "screentimeit's what I call them) for it already as the story comes to an end. Anyway, I'm going to keep reading this to see what happens.

Thank you for the update. I hope all will be well and I look forward to reading the rest of the story as it is posted

sorry to hear the other author ! hope to see future chapies soon!

I really hope everything turns okay. Stay safe

I'm so sorry to hear that Bumblebee is ill! You are in our prayers Bumblebee and we hope you recover soon. God bless and take good care both of you!

love the visit to old smokey !

love how draco saw hermione's father & her best friends... great scene.. especially with draco present mr. granger with the gems !

love that everyone is happy about draco & hermione being enganged !

Loved this chapter. And that you added in Viktor for another acknowledgment of their engagement. I’m sad Draco doesn’t really have any friends to ask for the wedding party. Almost makes me want Harry to step up and offer to be in that position as a show of good faith for the relationship to come. Great chapter and I look forward to the next update.

Come on girl! You can't leave us waiting for much more! We need to read what's next.
Excellent chapter

Oh my gosh! I loved this chapter. And Ron is such a git!

I’m so glad they are starting to understand how deep their affection is.

I love that Hermione is blowing Draco away with this date. There’s something to be said about impressing a guy who has lived a first class lifestyle.

That date was incredible!

I’m so glad that’s worked out. You had me stressing there for a bit. Great chapter.