I certainly hope you continue this further, it has so much potential already it would be a crying shame to abandon it.

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Guys that watch TTS: HON HON HON HON HON HON~! BAZINGA~!

With that flashback, I'd be very surprised and disappointed if he wasn't related to a certain Tactical Genius.

Please make more

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Quite a nice flow and quite curious to see how they continue and the reaction of the rest when they found out they "successfully chase out ehe fake useless Arc" and he left quietly especially if they found his equipment in the wild or something and presume him dead... It would be a rollercoaster especially when they see again doubly so if he done it while saving them and they thought it was a delusion while they are injured and he walk awaya after making sure they are safe and only thinking it must be him cause they are alive and safe somewhere else when they woke up... It would be a nice story since it does as well embrace a aspect of Jaune thats not widely explored... His entertainer side of dance and singing... Also maybe his tactical side which a lot seem to ignore that i hope to be implement as well once a while... Anyway hope to read more of this in the future! Keep up the great work n hope you are doing great!

noice.

Interesting story. Hope to see more soon.

love it can't wait to see for what's in store for the blonde

Plz make more

Very interesting story, reaaaaally like it.

I love the first chalet of this. I am looking forward to his dance

This is interesting.

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hope to see more