Awwww this was so sweet! I love Brooklyn 99 and especially this episode. I'd love to read a story about the real date!

Aww I love this story. I couldn't put it down, so cute. Thank you for sharing it.
I was impressed with Draco's persistence to the extent of the fight they watched. Sweet last chapter. I like that it was real with nerves and butting heads etc.

Absolutely hilarious. I’ve never seen Brooklyn 99 but this story was perfect.

I love that they both finally owned up to their true feelings for the other, but am not wild about the closing sentiment, just my opinion. I did enjoy the 'arseholish' names earlier, though...very creative!

I really thought he'd insist on waiting with her, instead of leaving her alone, at night, guarding three big guys, waiting on ministry obliviators...sure hope they have a speedy response time!

I have to say this is officially the worst date I've ever heard of, and it's only half done! Draco must be a sick genius, but I won't be surprised if he really does make a move before he leaves her, as I don't believe for a minute that he has no interest in doing anything (clean or dirty) to her, despite what he said.

Oh my, that dress and heels... I wish I could see a picture of them on their date from hell!

Oh my, this was so hilarious seeing Hermione's pouty reaction to Draco winning the bet...and seeing Drunk Draco and Drunk Hermione when they made the bet!

B99!

Awww sweet ending. “Bitch” lol

Awww I want a Falafel Draco.

Draco it’s a charming funny as hell ass in this story! Love him.

*inappropriate swear word for a public forum* hilarious!
Loved it :)

Very funny.

Competition, worst date and then funny, cute and romantic - you are an excellent writer. Ty