That one question though

Who is the voice?

Aww nice little ending.

Annabeth just collapsed crying on the floor without even checking to see if Percy was dead? She's very methodical. It doesn't seem like something she would do.

Hmm. Percy died rather quickly. It would've taken much longer if he had simply cut his wrists and arms.

This chapter was not as emotionally tense as I had hoped, but it was still well written.

Well, he changed his mind rather quickly...

You switch from first person to third person for Annabeth. Never switch the point of view in the middle of a story.

You switch from first person to third person for Annabeth. Never switch the point of view in the middle of a story.

Percy's mom doesn't seem that concerned.

WHY DID IT CLUMP MY REVIEWS TOGETHER.

You switch from first person to third person for Annabeth. Never switch the point of view in the middle of a story.

The fact that you portray the voice as a separate entity slightly annoys me. Ooh, this chapter is interesting. The voice does list some valid reasons. Actually, cutting your wrist won't necessarily kill you. If you get medical attention right away if you change your mind, you'll live. Ahh why is poseidon involved? It does detract from the overall emotion of the story. A few spelling mistakes here and there,your" instead of "you're"). Nothing a little editing can't fix. Percy is a little out of character, but overall, great job! Hmm. I doubt Amphitrite would actually help Percy. After all, Poseidon pretty much snubbed her in the last chapter.

I was the first one to comment on the sequel! (Last I checked.)

Really good, um, sally said “I’m only sorry what I did to him, I think you ment ‘what it did to him” so I read it like that, also, props on the dumbledore quote! Dumbledore is a wise man

I was hoping the sequel would be Percy in Elysium. (The user who is to lazy to sign in)