I hope Tommen in the end will be a great king and not step down from the throne

Fuck Cersei is gone...

Well I want to know who is the perpectraitor... I'm curious very Curious

So weird having Jon in this story even more dumbed down then Show version. Extremely forced. Politically it makes no sense that the Northern lords would accept a Lannister let alone Tyrion be with Sansa.
This whole Tyrion/Sansa thing is so contrived that it’s cringe worthy.

love this story. I just feel so bad for Tommen. some part of me wants him to live and end up being a great king.

This was interesting. Though I am confused about Cersei actually escaping because her section ended with the implication that the person who had come was going to kill her, not save her. So what's the deal there? Is she actual free or was she killed and then her corpse hidden?

Hi
The chapter was really great.
I like how you developed the relationship between Tyrion and Sansa
I’m excited to see how people will react.

I'm so glad Tyrion and Sansa are finding love with each other!

I feel so bad for Tommen. I can understand not wanting to move on and to love another person and get another queen but to give up the throne without a fight seems rather pointless with all the work he just put into becoming a good king

This was really good and I find it depressing that Tommen doesn't plan to live after the great war. Here's hoping that someone gives him a reason to live.

I hope Tommen remains King

I think Tommen gonna be a great king

This is really fascinating. Eager to see whats next and how Cersei's trial will go.

Great story and chapter, I would love to see Tommen go north to winterfell to join the fight as well as some of the other great lords of westeros. Surely Robin Aryn would fight with his kin, its not like his mother is still trying to stop him from getting involved in conflict. I think it would also make sense for Edmure Tully to go north, with all the armies going north to winterfell surely he would go north with the Tully forces which were forgotten after season 6.

I’m sorry but didn’t Jon Snow her tackles by Wights into icy waters at the end of the last chapter? Why’s he suddenly in Kings Landing like nothing happened?

Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!

You continue the story I'm so happy I wanna cry of happiness.
I love this fanfic of Tommen not been death so happy. O u O

Did you will continue I hope until you finished.
I was so ancious about the way the were speak and the famous first reunion.
I little sad because Tyrion isn't talk to Tommen alone but I understand that he is not Cersei but I will love to see a scene like that.

Keep going in I will love to keep reading it.

XoXo
Percy Ross