Nice work, looking forward to more!

Oh no, hinata get caught by Akatsuki. Hope Naruto will come and saved her.

Awww Sasuke is getting the stick out of his ass :)
I liked how Naruto is giving emotional "get-your-shit-together" speeches in a very Naruto-like fashion, and how they beat Deidara working together.
I wonder how's Hinata holding up against Gaara.

Wow! Run Hinata!
I loved this chapter, please hurry and update as soon as you can.

I like how carefully you craft your sentences, and add detail when it's needed without any lengthy or boring sentences.
Thank you for writing and sharing this with us.

Hi there! I'm really impressed by this story, it's original and every chapter ends in such a way that you can't help but to want to read the next one.
Keep up the great work!

Gaara will join them in their journey right ? Right ? Right ?...

This is so so so so so so so so so gooooood...hope you'll fast update

Good story but it's toad not frog

so jiraiya used the same trick as the manga for naruto use his power.
ask what is orbing.
because if it is only little teleportation and maybe doing a rasengan, that really suck (especially at the price of a soul)
hope orbing is far more than that (like including seal crafting talent, admantine chains, elemental manipulation, etc).
If sasuke become rival or ennemy, i can guess, like the manga, naruto will be always far behind sasuke in strength and skills until the near end of the story.

This is such a good story, thank you for the update!

well Jiraiya you were also a deadlast so you shouldn't talk. Then again you were always a hypocrite, just like Kakashi.

And the plot thickens! I wonder when Naruto will realize that Hinata is in danger. I am looking forward to your next update!

Things are becoming clear, but at the same time more questions appear.

cool chapter, i wonder what hinata really is now.