Hahahaha Oh my goodness this was funny! I forever now have a mental image of an annoyed Wario holding a Baby Luigi is both adorable and funny at the same time.

I love this and I'll be sure to check out the next chapter.

One paaaaauuunch!
Heheh, that was pretty charming. I was wondering if the DreamStone was gonna pull out another mech but Wario didn't give it enough time to get that grouchy. It was kind of cute the way Luigi was snuggling up to Wario the whole story.
Was Antasma enjoying all that masculine attention he was getting? Maybe if you squint.

I think having the Dreamstone and Wario interact was the one thing I never knew I wanted.

Anyways, good job! The Wah-io bros save the day!

Great job! LOL XD Wario defeated Antasma with his farts

Nice story. I'm pretty sure vice versa is true about the writing jokes thing, but whatever you say.

Hahaha! Wario and Waluigi will be back to scheme another day!
XD The ending is funny and gross, too. And yes! Writing jokes IS more important than sleep!

"Malleo" and "Wee-gee" for the win. (Seriously, they're adorable.) Next time...I don't know what happens next time. Is this going to be a short story or longer?

The purest green bean there ever was

I think I enjoyed the jab at the excessive amount of prophesies there are in the Mario games a bit too much. Anyways, its interesting to see a story about the Wario duo. They're an amusing contrast to the Mario Bros.
Story prompts can be very helpful, I find. The trouble I usually run into with short stories in general is making them stay short. And finding out what I can and can't work into a plot.
Most of the time with short stories its a balancing act of not providing too little or too much information, exposition, etc. Well, that's my observation from what I have read and have done, anyway. Trying to keep in mind throughout the process whats needed and whats not. Or what extra details to include (or not include,) is something I always try to keep in mind.
(Sorry if that informatin was excessive or unnecessary. Not the best giver of advice myslef.)

You make me smile, Norm! I really enjoy reading about Wario and Waluigi when you do them this way, it's like a sitcom. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hi! You asked to leave a review, so I intend to ;). First off, AWESOME! I like the basis of the story so far. There are four minor writing errors that I saw that are easy to fix. I'll send a PM to you so I don't clutter your comment sections with things that won't make sense once the errors are fixed.
Overall, I liked it. I thought the story was wonderfully presented in a fashion that made it entertaining for me. I'm looking forwards to part two!

Oml all those Ace Attorney references were good :D
I've never imagined Antasma turning into a woman, but I suppose he could since he's got shapeshifting powers of some sort.

I agree this is different than what you usually post, but I am enjoying it. It's kinda like a mix of an adventure and a crime case. Interesting.

This is hilarious, I'll look out for updates!

The dreams of the 90's are still alive in Portland? Which Portland? I just moved to one and that may be true...
Alrighty, I am intrigued! Can I just say right off he bat: I love the last names you picked for Wario and Waluigi. And I am finding them surprisingly likable, I can't wait to see where this adventure leads!