I wish they'd lived, but it's ok. It was a good story

OMG HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT!

I got so into this fanfic! I even cried a little at the end! Thank you for writing this!

So I've been reading this story so far and its pretty good. I really like your writing style. The one thing that bugs me is that you say Blaise is a girl but in the books and the movies Blaise Zabini is a boy. Its ok but I would like to know why that is.

Annabeth

A penguin lover

What! This was really good up until now. Totally rushed into it! frustrating way to ruin a potentially great story!

good story but the ending seemed a little romeo and Juliet to me.

Bad ending man...

Blaise is a guy just to say i got a bit confused but i understand you

This was an amazing story and I loved it...except the end! Why did they have to die? Why didn't she go on, I feel like it makes Hermione really weak, but that's just me. I was just wondering why you made them die?

Gah! It was a really good story, but I can't believe they died!

Still an interesting ending though.

THIS IS GOING TO BE GOOD

If you are using the Blaise out of the Harry Potter books, you have the wrong gender. He's a guy just an fyi.

So...I a little bit went into an uncontrollable paroxysm of laughter, which has yet to subside over the line "she didn't even know he was inside her until he began to move", which was possibly not the effect you were going for...but the idea of Draco with a tiny dick just cracks me up. I like this story so far, but I am definitely put off by your grammar (gunna, hafta, etc.).

I loved it

Hermione knows very well what pain is, physical and emotional. She had to make her own parents forget that they had a daughter and was tortured at the Malfoy Manor, and those are only two of the more obvious examples.

omg i hope that is not the end. i hope they are going to wake up and it all will have been a dream, because that is just so sad