The men in black technically are real in this universe. Not the actual agency they were the alliance of shades which removed signs of alien activities and witnesses.
They were androids. They were referenced in the animate episode dreamland.

Blimey that was a long chapter,got my curiosity piqued though,and i'm a sucker for any Clara stories,so i'll definitely continue catching up ,mind you with 60 chapters to go might take me a while.

Love this, complete love it. Wondering how your going to handle River, Will she never have existed because the doctor saves Melody and Amy and Rory raise her Or will she die in the library and they continue meeting her Like cannon and she marries them both? Will they find a way to save her from the library? changing her future so they meet up more often even meeting doctor 13? so many avenues to go down, River is one of my Favorited characters and I honestly think that in cannon if they (River and Clara) hadn't been so awkward with both of them loving the doctor they'd have been all over each other

I think u should have changed the doctors speech because at this point in his timeline he has not watched the birth of the universe or watched as time ran out

Sooo are we still going to have the Timelord Victorious? Because i do love Water of Mars and the fact that The Doctor was so close to lose himself in a dark path.

Night of the Doctor is a good episode and i like that you put it here, i do wish that you do chapter on the Time War (the Nightmare Child, The Could Have Been King...) because that war was more than just Dalek when Russel was writting that show

Well this was unexpected but certainly not unwelcome. Good to see more of the old romantic.

I think Series 12 was a step up from 11 but I agree with you on all the episodes. Though I'm pretty sure "Love and Monsters" was worse than "Orphan 55".

Good Chapter

Good Chapter

My god. I have never seen a Doctor Who fanfic quite like this, and I'm glad to say that I absolutely love it! From reading all of this, I'm honestly excited to see what you have planned for Season 4 and (I know it's ages away but still...) Day of the Doctor.

Thank you so much.
Love this chapter.

Good Chapter

Plz more...

Always did love the run away bride. Donna is absolutely brilliant

I must say this story has been absolutely superlative so far! And criminally under reviewed.
On the whole your writing has been excellent. There are a few niggles I have with it however. Largely with the dialogue. The use of things like *scoffs* are a little jarring to read and interrupts the flow, but ultimately it does get the point across so it's not egregious.
Some of the conversations seemed a little stunted in places like when Rose met Clara for the first time and began talking. It felt like it was a conversation that would actually play out... if that makes sense. Ultimately though, it's very good. These are just niggles based off of my personal preferences.
Nine's characterisation feels a little wonky at times, but he bounces off of Clara very well so I like it well enough, and I'm only on chapter 10 of 56 so I have faith itll either improve or I'll get used to it.
I havent read something this fun since Time Child, so I'm very much looking forward to reading more!

Downing Street has been rebuilt
Forgot about that

Maybe he doesn’t go after her because the paradox machine isn’t running yet
If he did it now it would just mess with his own plans
And after that she might just be dealt with by the toclafane

Forgot they did the airship

The changes are fine I noticed there was no Lucy but it didn’t really matter to me, I actually find it more interesting to have her not here and see how that affects things

I honestly can’t remember the other person you removed

I was trying to hold out till part 2 was written but I couldn’t wait any longer
That’s why I only read this ch now