nice start!

This is interesting. Continue when you can.

*squeeing in both horror of the potential cat-fight, glee at the waffy-ness, an sadness of the story coming to an end*
SO CUTE!
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also, me thinks dragon an garp are going to get THEIR butts kicked if they stick around for too much longer 3

keep up the good work _

Positive note or not, I'm still burning!

Loved the chapter but amoong everythin loved Brulee missing Amandes decapitation tendences it was reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally fun

ouuuu yeaaaah waht a ending big moom is heeeeeereeeee i hope you update this fic! its goood reaally Good and one of the few that dosn't have big mom as a big bad pirate i love here dream and her charaacter so i always wanted a fic where she was a "Good" pirate and this is the one

Luffy x witney bay fanfic loooove it and beeeing a charlootte too this is awesome i hope to se an update son but well if not it was Good at list til here. although Whtey bay is a old lady as posted on last cahpters being at least 50 Years old its Good to se some luffyxwhiteybay fanfic with big mom as his mother

Almost cried at Marco's words. laughed with Sanks reply Love it hope that afet more than a year you Will update the fanfic expect in the last chapter posted something with big mom and the revs happening storming marienford and shanks and the others arraving like luffy with ace… late but in time to save him

The Monkey family

I think whitey bay is hot on all but it's kinda cringey for them to fall In love just like that.

I love this

Lmao Luffy is a charlotte boy all right. Welcome to the family.

Interesting idea.

I enjoyed this and I look forward to reading more!
Thanks for sharing ;)

Whats with all the sexual predators and luffy?