I honestly don't think that's a good start fo a relationship in real life but it was a nice read :)

Oh crap. Those people messed up. And poor Aunt May. I hope she's happy. I larb her

Hey so I just finished reading this and I just wanted to say the story was good. I loved how you made Tony and Pepper his aunt and uncle instead of adoptive parents because I feel like it's really forced when people make him say 'dad' and 'mom' and personally it makes me feel awkward. ALSO I don't think you should have made Peter punch Flush because he could have killed him espacially if he was as enraged as I probably would have been (Should have been MJ) REALLY THOUGH she could've knocked the BIOTCH out! I would be surprized if someone took the time to rea dthis whole thing cuz i wouldnt have

ALL THE LUCK-SADDIE

You should continue the story! It is really good!

I liked the story. I would also like another kind of field trip fanfic where peter and tony never met before..Where tony and other avengers have met spiderman but don't know his secret identity.

Please update soon!

How beautiful! Absolutely snagging. I love that Tony bought Peter the car

I love this story!

[Maria/Tour Guide POV]
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HONESTLY I GO ORDER YOUR NEPHEW'S MEDICATIONS AND YOU'RE ALREADY GRABBING A 16 YEAR OLD BY HIS COLLAR WHY DO I EVEN TRY? What the frick..? What's FRIDAY looking at? oKAY I officially hate this Flash kid but Stark better cut it out because if they come here to sue us I WILL HAVE TO FIND THE LAWYER
PETER I WILL HAVE TO CLEAN UP THE BLOOD SO CUT IT OUT.
Yes, yes, early end to the field trip how tragic now can you excuse me I have to book the housing plans for King T'Challa and Princess Shuri as well as call about the smoke detectors not to mention the mountains of papers I have to proofread and send back to the analysts so they can send me a paper with the EXACT SAME MISTAKES because "she's just the intern she's excited to work here!" I'm also excited to stick a pencil through my eye at least then I might get some money for reimbursement.
It's for the resume, for the resume, for the resume. At least that's what I tell myself pretending I have the time to write a resume instead of writing the report for the purchased rights for the papers and journals that all the scientists love to write every time a pen drops.

I am the backbone of this company and they don't even know it.

[more Maria POV]
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Okay THANK GOD they have a lunch break because I have to go yell at Black Widow for causing me more paperwork what has my life come to. Oh look it's Tony Stark I really hope he doesn't see me because I really don't have time to get him more over-caffeinated soda.
What is Peter doing? You know what? He knows the tower so FOR ONCE something doesn't have to be my problem. Speaking of, I need to call the pharmacy about Peter and Tony's medications just add that to the freaking To-Do list.

[btw if you didn't read last review tour guide and I have the same name]
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I was really imagining being the tour guide character and it's a lot of fun
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Flash, I haven't been paid to know Peter I don't even get paid for this internship. Wait crap I have to get Miss Potts' coffee is there literally anyone else that can do this? You're resume will look good, just remember that and you'll get through this. Yes, Dr. Banner can go on and I can go get the coffee and call the contractor about that wall Thor broke down while he was sleepwalking because I AM APPARENTLY THE ONLY ONE IN THIS BUILDING WHO CAN DO THESE THINGS.

Oh god it's the Avengers and if one of them breaks something I have to replace- AND DID SHE JUST PUNCH THAT KID IF I HAVE TO DO PAPERWORK FOR THIS
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Pray for the me in an alternate dimension

Pretty dialogue heavy and the characters seemed slightly out of character at moments (Flash would probably sarcastically say how they finally got to see Peter's "internship" and not be so on the nose about his doubts).
But you know, you used my name (which literally no one ever does) so I'm willing to gloss past those things.
Also I shall also pretend that is me and I have an actual internship doing minor bookkeeping or copy-editing or something. Maybe doing a tour because everyone is freaking busy so get the intern.

Hmm interesting twist. But enjoy reading it update soon please.

Aaaaw this is adorable! Please update soon!

a, bad idea. and b, is Flash really that stupid? does he have a death wish or something?