This is an amazing fic! I hope you will continue writing it, i can’t wait to read what happens to Zane!

Omg you're amazing at writing! The pacing and dialogue is incredible, not to mention the plot you have going so far

UPDATE!

This is great!

What I love about this story is that all of the ninja are concerned for Zane. Not just the fact that he is unconscious for the time being it is that they're concerened for his mental health. The fact that they trust Neuro to help shows that they'd do anything to help Zane, or another member of the team.

Keep going! Yeah life gets rough, but that doesn't mean you should stop and sit in the chaos. Walk out of it, don't stop there, keep going!

Plz update this story!

okay. I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! i love all the other ones to BUT SOMETHING ABOUT LLOYD AND NEURO SPENDING TIME TOGETHER LIKE THAT I JUST-!1!

i love your writing so much

Okay, it sounds like you have a really harsh life, but geez you can write! It's good, it's angsty, it's Zane-centric, it got it all! The way Kai is the main character, but you include all the other ninja in a perfect way, and you have brought Neuro back, and he's also really good written, and much more adult-like than the others. I really love your story so much and it's okay if too many things is happening in your life, so you can't finish it right now. But all the love to you, and never quit, the balance of life will change to the better!

I absolutely love this story!
Everyone is so in character and I just love it! I wonder what Zane's repressing, or is it just how his brain is trying to make up for lost memory? I was a bit concerned first chapter, and I wasn't ecpecting it to get quite this serious. It's SO GOOD! well, not for the ninja, but I'm really enjoying reading this!
I'm so sorry to hear about the family troubles you had to go through, I hope you're ok. Take as long as you need with the update, if you still feel like updating that is, but don't feel pressured to do so if you don't wanna. Pressure sucks. If you do post another chapter though, I'll be right here straight away! :D

The way you've had the characters interact is really in character for all of them and I can feel the familial love they all have for each other. Your wonderful prose has made this a lovely read.

hmm... Zane what is going on with you?

don't worry about how often you update, take as long as you need

I'll gladly wait for however long it takes

This chapter was amazing :3

Ah I was so happy to see you had updated, and I wasn’t disappointed! Loving your story :)

F*CK F*CK F*CK. IT'S HERE! EVERYBODY CELEBRATE, IT'S FINALLY HERE!

Hehe, I guess staying up till 11 at night has it's perks. I was just about to say that you had a problem with code in the chapter, when you took it down and fixed it.

I'm sorry to hear about your loss, I've been through a few recently as well, so I guess I'm here for you.

You needn't worry, the chapter was great, albeit a tad short and with one typo, but great nonetheless.

*Gasp* A chapter within four months? I though that was just a myth? I look forward to it.

Ok, first of all I love the way you are writing, this is the best fanfic I've read in the Ninjago fandom, the idea is too solid and the narrative is compelling. The way you express yourself makes me think you have a good foundation for writing and I congratulate you for that. The interaction of the characters feels good and they are not out of place and I thank you very much for that, since many change the personality of the character due to whims of the author. And. Oh my God! the way you wrote the interactions with Neuro and what happens to Zane, what reality is very precise with this type of illness and how it affects mentally the person who suffers it. So thanks for writing this, really thank you.

I've been waiting. And waiting. And waiting. please update. I have been looking forward to a chapter for ETERNITY.