Reviews for Heartbeat
Susan Popplewell chapter 11 . 1/6
Sweet! Are you doing anymore?
Susan Popplewell chapter 10 . 1/6
That was VERY well done! Quite clever with not revealing that it was a dream at first.
Susan Popplewell chapter 8 . 1/6
Well done!
Susan Popplewell chapter 5 . 1/6
Why couldn't she and Prince Hans simply marry and keep the child? Judging by what you've written, Hans is good and hasn't been trying to steal the throne like in the movie, LOL!
Susan Popplewell chapter 3 . 1/6
This is sweet. While I do agree with NamelessSaint on SOME points for his reasons for hating the Helsa ship, I believe in forgiveness and redemption, so don't hate you or anyone else for the Hans/Elsa romance.
salty nap princess chapter 3 . 8/21/2018
I'm sorry you got hate reviews. I honestly hate it when that happens but I hope you push through and continue to write. I like this story and appreciate you writing avout helsa
Guest chapter 11 . 6/16/2018
I am also feeling sorry for the mother of that person who craps on every comment box for mere attention. Hope she has also got a smart and sensible kid for a proper balance.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/15/2018
Elsa is a veteran in giving birth and knows all the signs and details and doesn't panic at all. A great monarch with a wonderful family.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/14/2018
Did someone really say that even a 10-year-old kid can tell right from wrong but a 30-year-old adult can't? Kinda feel sorry for their mother but no worries, she has one smart kid at least. Wow some shippers really amused me to no end. Thank you for the fanfics entertainment.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/14/2018
She's Princess Abigail of Aren-delle! Abigail deserves to inherit her birth mother's ice powers, doesn't she? I'm sorry but do you remember Abigail Lincoln from Codename Kids Next Door?
Guest chapter 11 . 6/14/2018
NamelessSaint is the best entertainer on this site. We love you sweetie! Shipping Helsa was never more interesting before... all thanks to you. Where do you stay dove? My younger brother is 10 years old, well almost your age. He also hates Hans a lot (smart kid) I could send him over to your place or you could visit ours because both of you would make excellent playmates. Love you, NamelessSaint :*
Guest chapter 10 . 6/14/2018
Bittersweet stories are really your field huh? Nice works, keep writing :)
PrinceLoki chapter 11 . 6/14/2018
:) :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
Hi namelesssaint buddy, don't bother with the Helsa fans and let them be. The pathetic dreamers have to have their wicked dreams since it's never gonna happen in the reality.
No matter how hard they try to ornament Hans and his actions, it will not change the fact that he is a hypocrite and murderer.
And who will fall for a man that try to kill her and her dear sister? Masochism or Stockholm syndrome? Definitely not the real sensible Elsa.
Oh it really sounds kinda pathetic.
Sorry I don't have an account ID, since kinda feel the writer's writting skill is not good enough to inspire me to register and leave a reply, otherwise the writer can reply whatever she likes to me.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/5/2018
Seriously, Hans deserved a better fate than death, didn't he?
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