Reviews for Extra Ordinary |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You story has got me gripped so far with its plot. Your depiction of the characters make them fun and interesting to read about even with the slight differences made to canon. And the threat with the masked man just makes things even more intriguing. Excited to see where you would take this story. Hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reason... Reasonability? Responsibility, you mean? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tensions are rising… what were Bakashi and Naruto talking about?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe poor Obito your denial is so funny! And now he's gone and broken his promise. Poor guy. Thanks for writing~! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uchiha Phobia...Bwhahaha that's freaking gold! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww.. so what happen next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() On wow, what a cliffhanger! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhh i did not check my emails and missed your update.. i am ashamed of myself! good job on the chapter... little obito seems to have a crusshh... love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() When he said “Her too?”, was Kakashi mocking Obito for having a crush on yet another girl? Poor fella. Anyway. This is an excellent story! Hopefully Naruto doesn’t die. I want to know why Tobi’s even here! I also want to know which version of Naruto this is, bc clearly she knew Minato as her father. You’re a skilled writer! Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are back! love ya story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, that's an intense way to end the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() cmon its not fair to end the chapter like this, cant wait for the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have no idea how happy it makes me to see you updating this little treasure of story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, please update soon |