Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki: Ninja Gamer
Percy Jackson7 chapter 13 . 12/12/2019
Congrats to your team can't wait for another chapter
SinfulLord chapter 1 . 12/11/2019
Continue this fic...
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 13 . 11/4/2019
I would like it if you would continue thus fanfic.
frankieu chapter 13 . 11/2/2019
focus on one thing i hope it will be this story
yeah yeah chapter 12 . 9/16/2019
Really, that's what you do? It just got to the good part, and you decided to put it on a hiatus? I guess you are the same as the others.
Carrenho96 chapter 4 . 9/14/2019
Didin't like your scene with Hinata at all. Naruto being hurt in front of Hinata is nothing new, the most she's ever done is shyly offer some cream, I thought that since the story is AU, Hinata's personality may be diferrent from cannon, but the start of the interaction and Naruto's memories didn't come off as such. You just changed it out of nowhere, like a switch, Hinata canon to Hinata B, with such a sudden change in personality I was expecting someone like Anko or Yugao to have changed places with her to assure Naruto didn't run off. How useful is it to bandage a broken nose anyway?
Guest chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
Story is mostly Author Noted (seriously abused), replying to reviewers (doesn t need to be included in the story), and a lot of game stats with very little actual story.
Pat123 chapter 11 . 4/14/2019
the story is good I just hope this story doesn't become one that is all about sex and pairing. I just want to read a story that is about the things he have to do to become strong and please don't pair him up Hinata or Sakura it just get old
Emeraldfox57 chapter 11 . 4/13/2019
Sweet. I love this story so if you need to rewrite or edit to make it easier for you to update then good! Let us know when you rewrite it/edit it
Guest chapter 10 . 4/4/2019
please write more of this story
Pat123 chapter 10 . 4/1/2019
omg can you update this story
zerkses chapter 10 . 1/15/2019
Meh the last chapter was basicly
-long author note/reviev answer
-copy/paste skill info
-tiny bit of actual story
-long end note
The actual word count on relevant plot is minimal thats rly disapointing
Guest chapter 10 . 1/14/2019
Huh. Interesting chapter update. But since there wasn't any meat to it, that's all I can say.

If you really want to know the difference in popularity between this story and the other 3 of yours, here's my opinion:

Your other Naruto fic has an OC as main char. An OC which is either a self-insert or an author avatar at that. Plus it's set pre-canon. Enough said.

The other two fics are My Hero Academia fics with only one or two chapters posted, one of which has, again, OC main char. OC *paired* with a canon main char at that. Enough said.

In comparison, Ninja Gamer has the advantage of being a gamer!Naruto fic (there are few of them as it is), and of being in the beginning stages yet. Gamer stories always tend to be popular in the beginning. And then, because Gamer fics tend to be 50 chapters, around chapter 12/15/20 or so, a lot of those stories tend to become stupid because the author loses perspective and starts adding mountains of distasteful nonsense or OOC behaviour into the story, so interest gets lost. I'm hoping for better from this story, but I fully expect it won't be long until stuff starts to happen like Naruto's personality being warped into the ultimate emo edgelord, or the exaggerated Sasuke-bashing starts to take off. Or maybe you will go the route of many other gamer badfics and have Naruto be a haremlord of brainwashed women that are little more than sex puppets who can talk. In fact, I fully expect after reading this chapter, that Naruto talking sense into Sakura will result in her having a crush on him and first being a rival to Hinata because of that or being the first member of Naruto's harem.

One recommendation: Stop review answering inside the fic. The fic's wordcount is being padded enough as it is with all that wall of text that is the gamer status messages and your ANs. Ostensibly this fic has 23k words. In reality, it probably doesn't go above 15k if that.
MarvelNinja10 chapter 10 . 1/14/2019
I’m sorry, but I hope Se Poe’s is really really bad, that asshole insults your family. That’s where lines are drawn, good for you man! And down with the rampant plagiarism on this site!
Cadelorbe12 chapter 10 . 1/14/2019
One more awesome chapter added. :D
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