| Reviews for Three Grumpy Gits and a Baby |
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   HoneyBear84 chapter 8 . 4/15 Love it |
| Ravenclaw-Slytherin-Erudite chapter 8 . 2/5 This is amazing! Please write more, I love this! |
| kurokitty chapter 8 . 11/3/2018 cute |
| gginsc chapter 8 . 4/22/2018 AWWW! I wish Harry had stayed young longer! Good ending, though. Good luck Severus and Tonks! |
| ChiruKaio chapter 7 . 4/21/2018 guidelines of this site fanfictionnet (why is even the name of the original site banned in reviews ) |
| ChiruKaio chapter 7 . 4/21/2018 Hi, I won't call it smut since even parents have sex but I need to say that your describtion of this sceen would be the reason to give your story a much higher rating than anything else in this funny story. Like in books for children (0, 5, 9) or books for young (teenager13) there isn't anything about mature themes or sexuality above to hold hands and a shy kiss or (16) where there is mentioned that first steps of love without any describtion of the act. Your discribtion of the adult sceen between Remus and Sirius would already put the rating to age 18 and even this only because you describe it to much if you read the rating guidlines ). But I am an adult and even with this content I need to say that it isn't writen like something to be ashamed of. It is natural and even if kids prefer till or even with adulthood to think that there parents and teachers are genderless or without any sexuality. It is not written anywhere near pornographic! Sadly if you won't like to push you rating this much you will need to delete this scene and only describe it with a mention like that the cry did disturbe there time together. Since you shouldn't even mention anything mature related without ranking 16 ... in the German fanfiction site you would need to put with the screen a rankinh 18/Slash up or at least 12/Slash since if there is a main character relationship with the same gender it could hurt small minded people. |
| Sakura Lisel chapter 3 . 4/21/2018 Wait I just thought of something. Unless being deaged erased ALL of his memoried up until whatever age he is now, shouldn't little baby Harry STILL remember his uncles Moony and Padfoot, who should have been in his life back when he was this age the first time around? Or are even THOSE memories gone too and he has to get know Sirius and Remus all over again? |
| November-Clouds-One-and-Only chapter 7 . 4/21/2018 You couldn't have put a warning at the beginning? Personally, I don't enjoy reading smut. It's gross. Also, there may be younger readers who don't need to see this kind of stuff. |
| November-Clouds-One-and-Only chapter 6 . 4/19/2018 Aww. |
| gginsc chapter 5 . 4/18/2018 Tonks really has a thing for older men! |
| November-Clouds-One-and-Only chapter 3 . 4/17/2018 Nooo, do Tonks with Lupin, not SNAPE |
| Addison7413 chapter 4 . 4/17/2018 So cute! Great story! |
| alba chapter 2 . 4/15/2018 Oh I am so looking forward to reading the rest of this story. Great start. |
| gginsc chapter 3 . 4/16/2018 Harry is so cute! |
| November-Clouds-One-and-Only chapter 2 . 4/15/2018 What could go wrong. . . hmm what about everything? |
