| Reviews for Between the Lines |
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   nathan.vuong.5 chapter 4 . 10/22/2019 the drama felt forced? |
| Krionik chapter 1 . 7/12/2019 Great story so far! |
| Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 4 . 1/5/2019 I like this |
| Myllinu chapter 4 . 11/14/2018 Love the story. Hope you update soon |
| FireFox614 chapter 4 . 10/16/2018 Okay ummmm, holy hell, I just read all 4 chapters and I NEEED MORE. Please, please, don't let this die, I know it hasn't been updated in months but Please update this. This is a story that could be great one day, on Couer's level even. So please I besech you, don't let this die |
| shelwyn chapter 4 . 9/8/2018 Oi just a little more fluff... |
| shelwyn chapter 3 . 9/8/2018 Oh keep other perspectives out. Just keep it Jaune and Blake lol |
| shelwyn chapter 2 . 9/8/2018 More fluff good author! |
| shelwyn chapter 1 . 9/8/2018 One BLT please. |
| Noneofit chapter 1 . 7/8/2018 There’s three kinds of “romance” stories: 1. Shitty unrealistic garbage written by virgins and losers. 2. Heartwarming unrealistic idealist non-garbage 3. Realistic You’re doing number 2. The best stories are 3, but the best romances are 2. |
| Noneofit chapter 1 . 7/8/2018 Admiral is a navy rank second only to the Fleet Admiral. General is the highest army rank except for the General of the Armies or rare positions like “Supreme Commander of the Allied Forces” which was a rank during WWII. An admiral leads fleets and marines. Generals lead armies and infantry. The only real exception is in space opera where all non-planetary defense forces are Navy (space navy) and therefore all initial invasions are done by marines until transports can bring in the army. There are rare exceptions like Operation Overlord was in WWII, an amphibious assault by army forces supported by the navy. |
| scottusa1 chapter 4 . 6/13/2018 Great chapter. Keep it up. Laters. |
| pendragonZx chapter 4 . 6/13/2018 This is Knightshade done right! Good work. |
| X3runner chapter 4 . 6/5/2018 Noice chapter it developed both charaters in s way that I wouldent have seen coming. Funny thing is blake at this point apart from writing on jaunes body property of blake or going like the dogs do and spraying him with her sent has staked her clame nonone would go to those length for “just a frind”. |
| The Shadow Monarch chapter 4 . 6/5/2018 I understand Jaune and approve of his decision to join the war. He's basically an outcast and wants to find his self-worth. |
