That was pretty great though I have to ask for you base this off a comic dub? Because I saw one extremely similar

Gosh, this was just wonderful to read. Good Job.

This is a nice accompaniment to the one made by Drow79.

You shoulder check that one out too!

The Lion King Vs The Wrought Iron Hero by Drow79

I'm sad this is so short, so small. it's both painful and beautiful.

The fact that so few people have reviewed this is awful. But beside that this story is captivating and I love how you wrote my favorite fgo comic into words and I personally would like to see a conclusion to this grand tale

This is worthy to make a series...would you continue this instead of one shot?

This was amazing

This story was sad but it was amazing a king who abandon her idials and a cursed man who was betrayed by his
Archer no Shirou emiya picks the blade of promes Victory that one's belong to the person he one's and always love

Even if he picks the shater remains of his old idial to show this person a true Utopia

The Gar is strong in this one.

By the way, there's a similar fic written by Drow79 expanding their battle. I recommend to read it.

2 things the first is that this reminds me of a comic in saw a bit ago and second I would very much like to see a conclusion to the lance-toria VS EMIYA Battle

espero con ansias una segunda parte de esta historia.
emiyaXarturia por siempre :v

This was beautifully written. Since i am german my ability to review it properly are limited, but let me say to you that your style was really captivating. Now the only problem is that you need to write a proper conclusion to this. The King demands it ;D