I started reading this story because I needed something new to read. So far, I've laughed, felt like crying a little, and amazed with how you've been writing this. But I could help but question some of the things you've written. In the previous chapter with officer Miyamoto, would anyone really confess to kicking Lincoln out of the house knowing they could be arrested? Or confessing to beating up someone for selfish reasons? This doesn't seem like something Lynn or Lisa would ever admit to. Lynn wouldn't on the account she'd be band from every sport. And Lisa knows the law well enough that she wouldn't break it unless she knew she could get away with it. Lisa was afraid of being kicked off the 'Council' if she didn't make a friend to pass a class. I must say, the idea of Haiku having a kid brother who isn't only a pretty boy, but also can scare both her and Lucy was a stroke of brilliance. Can't wait to see what happens next. Stay safe and healthy.

First off, dude; I'm right there with you, I also HAAATE the term "Saint Lincoln." People used it all the time in some reviews for my Gal Pals story. Yes, Lincoln isn't perfect and he HAS done some things wrong.

But from my perspective, the Sisters' list of crimes is much longer than what Lincoln has done. The Brawl in the Family thing, for example was purely the Sisters' fault it escalated so highly. Lincoln only got involved because THEY made life harder for him (such as denying him use of the bathroom, the TV and access to food.) If I put up with all that, I'd stick my nose in their business too.

But nope, some fans believe the Sisters can do absolutely nothing wrong and that Lincoln deserves to be hated.

In any case, this was a gripping chapter; keep up the good work

The sisters need more than counselling... All of them except Lori and Lily should get sent to a disciplinary school and Rurik should make the parents take mandatory parenting classes.
Miss Lori is acting rather hypocritical by not acknowledging the moments when she treats Lincoln badly.

Not how I would have described that episode but imagine if that Protocol had gone off while someone important had visited the house? They'd be in trouble big time wouldn't they?

What most people who beatify him miss is that he always says "We're no angels."

With how Luna is acting, Lori should have their parents cut her out of being Lincoln’s legal guardian. If she’s gonna treat her brother like shit, then that title and responsibility needs to go to someone who can actually give him nurture and care.

YES! THANK YOU! FINALLY SOMEONE POINTS OUT THE IRONIC ILLOGIC OF THE SAINT LINCOLN "INSULT"!

I like how the story is progressing, however you might want to make another read through of the story and this chapter, as there are a few spots where the structure hiccups. By that I mean missing phrases and/or repeated words. Other than that, not bad and I'm looking forward to how this story progresses.

disregarding that rather poor review, I think this chapter was good, keep up the good work J

I hope that DrewBell understands this chapter and the author's notes. If only he acknowledged Gal Pals for what I and RawToonage would acknowledge it as instead of bashing us for supporting it and being with those pr**ks that tried to pressure Alexpv22 into deleting it. They are making me wish for them to be dead for their rancid behaviors. I hope fanfics expressing those thoughts become a thing.

Good chapter

They've got a message from the Action Man: Shape up!

Have Lynn Sr deliver spankings to every daughter and severely ground them for two months and their hobbies stored in the attic for those two months.

Good chapter

Lana seems to be really out of character here. I mean she’s one of the sisters Lincoln is close to, yet Lola’s showing guilt, while she laughs at her brother’s pain. Same with Luna.