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Nice chapter dude

Damn it

Oops, The sharingan bit that I mentioned for Naruto I was thinking of another book where Kakashi was the main character. In that one he tried to make Naruto a copy of himself like Guy does with Lee.

This... was not a great chapter I am sorry to say :( I am not being mean just honest in my opinion, I normally really like this book, but this felt even more like crack than usual and more like a non-canon omake than a real chapter... It felt all over the place, Orochimaru was much closer to Deadpool than a real villain. Kakashi wasn't even around at all this chapter and he is the main character. Naruto didn't use his sharingan (If he has it at all, I may have missed a chapter or something...). Tsunade should have MUCH more chakra than she showed off, because she has been storing it for YEARS. She only got old due to healing during the Pein arc. But all in all, this chapter feels like it was done by improv and without real thought behind it. Normally I love this book, and normally I don't try to criticize. Please don't get upset at all as I don't say this maliciously I am just concerned for the book and thought it would be helpful to point out what I had concerns with.

I look forward to multiple personally disorder Sasuke. Hopefully he gets the emotional support he needs.

Holy shit your alive!
Well keep up the good work
And be sure to update your other fics
Obviously when you feel like it and are
Done with this
Anyway, I like your fics
Cheers

Now this chapter is kinda BS. Can't see the fox settling his grudges like this at all at this point of the story.

At least Konoha and Kiri being allies can be used as the explanation for why Jiraiya doesn't just destroy Samehada right then and there. Why ninja in Naruto canon don't bother to carefully check any thing recovered from the battlefield as well as what they take from enemies is a mystery.

This is crazy and very amusing.

Keep up the good work.

Interesting premise, but your writing and characterisation need work.

There's also the option of performing the summoning jutsu without signing a contract. Though that's assuming Sasuke gets a result similar to what happened with Jiraiya rather than Boruto.

I LOVE THIS INSANELY AMAZING STORY AND MORE PLEASE!

Th
Keep going :)

This dude sounds like a pedophile fuck that