UPDATE

please I ask you to continue this story

Awe come on ,up date this one already. This is getting good.

You and another writer have the exact same opening by just a few variables, it’s freaky. Okay so, I think using Titans Curse is a bad choice to start off. It’s an important book for Percy being a honest to god good person, for Thalia to be a huntress, and Artemis for thinking all men aren’t that bad. Throwing Kratos into the mix kinda puts the center of attention all around him, which is normally the case but when the fate of the world needs to be decided making Kratos the main idea isn’t really a great option. Personally, I believe (like I said to the other writer), make this take place between or outside the books. Kratos would sooner kill the gods before doing their chore especially for Zeus and Athena.

So Deimos is the son of kratos, how did she forget that? Also how will atreus react when he finds out that he has half-brother

Good chapter

Interesting intro
Some small grammar errors

Such a promising start. Just a warning that other fan fictions seem to always forget. Please keep Kratos’ power consistent. He can fight and kill major gods even in his old age so don’t make him lose to Percy in a fight.

Conti. plese.

This is such a good story! I know it's only 2 chapters so far but it's so interesting already! I hope we get more lore or history as to why the gods are alive.

Good story

Dude this was good keep up the good work update soon please

this a very good story and has a lot of potential, but you Really need a Beta because of the numerous spelling and grammar mistakes.

I really hope you update, this is a nice start. I do not see too much problems.

I hope that you keep updating and can you make the chapters a bit longer please