This story has been absolutely amazing from start to finish and the final chapter was the perfect ending.

Hi! I just want to say, oh my god, this was one of the best fan fictions I have ever read. I couldn't stop reading it till the very last word. It was so in depth, and human; it was really awesome. I loved it so much, and I can't wait to see what other stories you have! Thank you for writing such an amazing story, and never stop writing! xoxoxoxoxoxo (:

Great representation of the characters! Lot’s of emotion.

You are a master writer of tension and suspense. This had me on the edge of my seat the whole story. This is definitely going into my favorites. Great job!

Uggghhhh so fuckin' good, man. I have been literally GLUED to my laptop reading this. Totally escaping reality for, like, hours, and I loved every second of it. You are a seriously fantastic writer, and what you do with these characters is unreal, honestly. So jealous. Also you make me feel ALL the feels goddamn.

Sat and read this from beginning to end. Your writing is so intriguing and really pulls one into the world that you're weaving. I absolutely loved this. Thank you for this. :)

Well this story destroyed my emotions. But it was also amazing, so good job! Right now I’m giving you a thumbs up through my tears.

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This is an amazing story and REALLY well written. Keep up the great work!

Loved what you did to Ross. Well deserved after all the potentially amazing people he had killed in the Raft. Brilliant story overall, thank you xx

Fantastic! I loved it, great writing and story line!

holy shit. you just did that.
" Far from home. "

Oh my goodness, I don’t even know what to say. Like seriously what do I even say? This fic is just so amazing! I absolutely loved it! Yes, that was the perfect way of getting rid of Ross! And that last chapter, the feels between Tony and Peter just... well made me squeal and cry and... ugh, I just love it so much!
One little thing I would do differently is that I wanted more to happen when Peter’s on the Raft (like maybe they would hurt him to incense Tony), or at least more details. I had some questions like how much food did they give him and how did they give it to him if he didn’t see light? How did Peter feel- was he super lonely, hungry, scared, cold, did he feel guilt or regret, how did he feel about Tony “breaking” his promise? Idk, that was just one little part that felt kinda rushed so it didn’t fully impact me what effect being there had on Peter. But it’s not that important and seriously this fic is AMAZING so don’t even worry about it, just ignore me if you want. You’re an awesome writer and the fact that I’m even critiquing this part of the story means that there’s like nothing else wrong with this story; plenty of other stories I don’t even critique because there’s so much wrong with them.
YES, YES, YES to another 51! Please! XD
Keep up the good work!

This was absolutely brilliant. It is 23.05, I have my baby sleeping next to me in the bed soon waking up to ea

This was really good!

Amazing! Fantastic! This was one of the tragedy stories I’ve had the privilege to read. I couldn’t put my phone down. I’m just really impressed with what you did here. Characters and plot are so solid. 11/10