Reviews for X Marks The Start
nire47 chapter 1 . 5/17
I enjoy this story. I think it will be cool if you continued with a part 2 going along with the series kinda of thing.
bobbihunterr chapter 1 . 4/20
This is such an amazing fic omg I can't even! I absolutely loved it so much! I have so many emotions. I love their little conversations and how you got them to meet is just perfect!
bigfan22 chapter 1 . 3/30
Damn...it's a shame this fic was only a one-shot. I would love to see how Sarah and Chuck deal with canon events as soulmates. Great job and thanks for writing!
Zanthraxone chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
This definitely needs a part two. Asap. I absolutely love it and how you wrote both Chuck and Sarah's backstory before Chuck would have technically started. I also really like what you did with them with the soulmate concept. I really enjoy those types of stories since they came out. Please just make it a better ending than what the series creators did. Good luck in your future stories and Bravo for a Fantastic Chuck story.
Mellia Bee chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
Oh my goodness. This fic took my brain by storm - I could not put it down! I’ve barely seen a handful of episodes from the show, I don’t read fanfic of it, I don’t even really like soulmate stories in general, but somehow I fell straight into this one and never wanted it to end. Everything from their first “meeting,” through both their relationships, the bloody “I love you,” all the way down to the final “look up” and beyond - this was just adorable and beautiful and I loved it so much! I was absolutely riveted. This will be a definite re-read. Thank you for this - it just made my whole day. :)
gbad chapter 1 . 8/20/2019
Really great premise. Not something I've ever seen before.
Couldn't turn away from it. Had to finish it in one sitting.
Thanks for the great story.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 1 . 8/10/2019
This was the best Chuck story I've ever read! I am at a lost for words at how AWESOME this story is! I love it.
potterfanxp123 chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
You know, the only thing wrong with this story is that it's basically a one-shot. That said, t'was wonderfully written. That said, if you were to continue this story, it opens up a lot of useful, probable arcs. For example, the entire trust issues between Charah would be entirely circumvented because of the entire soulmates thing.

One area I think you missed out on, with this story ending the way it did is the initial meeting between Sarah and Ellie. I can only imagine how excited Ellie would be too meet the woman Chuck had spent so many years talking back and forth with.

That said, I enjoyed it. Thank you for taking time to write, and have a great day!
Revan2574 chapter 1 . 4/5/2019
Great story, have you thought about a sequel set in this world set during the rest of season 1?
Ellen chapter 1 . 9/20/2018
Ooh, I hadn't seen any Chuck fics using the soulmate trope before. This was really engaging and well done. I love the thought of young Sam/ Katie/ Rebecca/ etc. having someone she can really count on.
Hoods chapter 1 . 9/20/2018
I really wish I could read more of this one. I need to know if they keep the soulmates thing a secret from everyone or if it becomes part of their 'cover' - like the CIA thinks it's fake for the cover when it actually isn't. And how Casey reacts when he learns about it. And whether they just have a normal relationship from the start or if they avoid it for the sake of the job. Also how Bryce reacts when he comes back from the grave. So many unanswered questions!
NCISGleek chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
Oh...my god. I loved this so much. I was hesitant at first but oh my god. Amazing. Blew me away. I like want you to continue it? But I get why you wouldn’t? It’s such a great place to end but I don’t want it to be over. Just wow. So. So good.
Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 8/15/2018
This is a really clever soulmates AU variation, and you placed it in a great spot in the Chuck canon timeline. I very much enjoyed this story. Thank you! :)
RC1701 chapter 1 . 8/1/2018
Another wonderful story. I can't stop thinking about the whole writing on skin thing; is it supernatural/spiritual or biological/symbiotic? Either way an excellent concept, especially for these characters. Love it!
Reyes9 chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
Finally found the time to read this one and it didn't disappoint. Great read.
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