So sweet...though, I’m kinda sad you starred Larry in instead of any of Gumball’s close friends...

I Like it. Chapter 2? :)

Interesting premise; I wouldn't mind seeing this story go further! For what it's worth, the only thing I'm a little disappointed in is the lack of build-up. Maybe giving the flashback some more time to introduce the characters like you would in a first-impression, and then showing how much (or little) Gumball had changed in the present-time.
Otherwise, I like how well you did the grammar on this one; serviceable and didn't take me out of the story.
I'll probably stop in to see how this one evolves over time. Conclusively, this fiction wasn't too shabby!

hey, i love your fic it beautiful and i almost though keep on good work

This was a nice story (one-shot?), though had a few flaws.
I didn't like how it was stacked up (that's always a problem for me). You could use line breaks to make it easier to read. I also felt as if it was a bit rushed and that caused it to be less than at least 1,000 words, which I recommend you do in each chapter. You should make it a bit longer by showing characters development (which you kinda did, but it ended far too quickly), try and make the reader feel emotions while reading, such as sadness, joy or make him sympathize with the characters.
Overall, good job, but needs a bit of work.